Nature Patterns

Spirals of trails from wandering snails,
Dapples of white and pink petals,
Imprints of pattering puppy paws
Adorned the path that we walked.

The art was most masterful on the dark pavement;
Patterns of nature installed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Mcintosh Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 9:09 AM
Wonderful. A winner. God bless you always, love, Gina
Swan Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 3:38 PM
Thanks Regina. God is good. J :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 6:46 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Delaney Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:46 PM
Beautiful, Jeanette. Nature’s patterns are indeed wonderful. SuZ
Swan Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:58 PM
Thanks SuZ. J :)
R P Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 9:05 PM
Loved masterful on the dark canvas. Beautiful poem.
Swan Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 9:09 PM
Thank you. This poem is for a contest, and that was the given line to include on a poem. It has a nice sound to it, but not my line. J :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 7:34 PM
A fun poem! I especially like the puppy paws! So cute!
Swan Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 12:43 AM
One of my favourite sounds.
Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 8:18 AM
I enjoyed reading your work. I am thinking for a contest maybe. Way to go. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K
Swan Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 6:28 PM
Glad you enjoyed this little one. It is for a contest re choosing a line to place in the poem. J :)
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