Bukang Liwayway Poet Rhyme

Nature Lover

Greener fields from a distance
                                                  So beautiful, can’t stop but glance
                                                     Peacefulness I feel in my heart
                                                       Bluish sky I see from above

                                                   Trees stand tall high and mighty
                                               Birds singing and appreciate its beauty
                                                       Animals scattered nowhere 
                                                  Eating grass here and everywhere

                                            Children’s happily playing with excitement
                                                    No worries, no disappointments
                                                      The spectacular picture I see
                                                       God made it for you and me


August 11, 2012
(Brookside Valley Resort)
For PD's Contest
2nd Place Winner  "Old/New Nature  Poems"

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Len Gasun May 23, 2013 at 9:07 PM I'm so so glad to read this once again my very dear friend Maria and saw it in the winner's list! This is really a very wonderful nature's poem. I love it so much as always! Big congratulations on your well-deserved super win! Cheers with big big sweetest hugs! love lots, Leonora

Joseph May May 22, 2013 at 2:47 PM congrats on your win Maria

Seosamh De Burca May 22, 2013 at 12:33 PM Congrats on your win, best wishes. S.

John Posey May 22, 2013 at 10:29 AM This is more than worthy of a place with the winners.... Congratulations... I can see this very well through your well focused poet's eye....Jake

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2013 at 9:03 AM Hello Maria, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) thank you for the wonderful nature poem... Luv~ Luv~ LINDA

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2012 at 4:58 AM I picture a farmland with those animals scattered everywhere. Not sure where Brookside Valley Resort is located but it sounds very beautiful. I would love this feeling: no worries, no disappointments. A picture of peace!

Dustin Self August 28, 2012 at 10:30 AM Good job. I love the outdoors and this poem is exactly how you should feel when you notice what the lord has created for us to enjoy. Excellent job!

Stephan McBride August 20, 2012 at 8:56 PM indeed everyday is different in beauty, what I really love is the extent of God even seperating 12 hours of day from 12 hours of darkness, love and God bless you

Poet Destroyer A August 15, 2012 at 11:52 PM MARY, i love nature as you see it... nice rocking poem..xox~pd

Luis Martinez-Rivera August 15, 2012 at 11:48 PM This is a lovely poem, and the portrait painted is spectacular. Thanks for stopping by I have many more if you wish to stop by again :D

Anthony Nutter August 15, 2012 at 8:09 AM What a beautiful picture your words paint. Loved it

Len Gasun August 15, 2012 at 7:22 AM Wow! I love it. Another wonderful poem about nature my friend. Congratulations and keep up the good work.

David Williams August 15, 2012 at 2:59 AM Mary great visions, I like...David

Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2012 at 2:11 AM Beautiful nature poem Mary, we must preserve the natural beauty. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)