Merv Hold Poet Other

Nature Is Wonderful Hs

nature in all forms,
she amazingly performs.
beauty, she adorns.

spreading flowers sweet,
making a spring day complete,
earthly wonders greet.

birds singing in tune.
now the owls hoot to the moon,
all will slumber soon.

fireflies glow brightly.
babies snuggle so tightly.
moonbeams fall lightly.

nature’s shining with a smile,
her work done and it’s worthwhile.

sponsor : joanna daniel
contest name : haiku sonnet 
4 x 5,7,5,  &  1 x 7  + 1 x 7  syllables in lines. 
checked  hms rhyme zone spell checker grammar checker
washed my hands and combed my hair. 
16 may 2023
thanks to the lady that helped me with all these rules.

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Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2023 at 3:10 AM - Congratulations on your win in the Haiku/Sonnet contest, Merv - hugs Merv Hold June 13, 2023 at 7:28 PM Had help with this one sweety. Never seen so many rules !! Was waitin for it to say I had to clap 3 times turn around and shout hooray!! I wrote it but it got corrected with a feminine touch. You may note I washed my hands and brushed my hair just for good measure. Thanks for the hug.

Joanna Daniel June 13, 2023 at 1:25 AM Wonderful work, Merv, with the rhyming haikus too, congratulations:) Merv Hold June 13, 2023 at 7:31 PM Ah Joanna, what can I say? You are definitely the lady of the day! What a crazy ride that was! I had curly hair when I began this torturous task. Now why is it dead straight you may ask!. Thanks for liking it honey.