Nature Interred

Wint'ry coats mingle
With dirty roads, revealing
Mankind's civil sin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 6:02 AM
'wintry/mingle/civil/sin,' ...fine short 'i' assonance. A cool HAIKU Aaron! Best wishes, Keith
Burton Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 5:41 AM
[smile] in a nut shell you were right about it, LOL
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December 5, 2008 at 5:03 PM
my poem is telling the reader that all this working hard and follwing the rules of the life and the bible will only get you broke, hungry, and depressed, this poem is not true buts about stealing a pacaso, three other poems are the conclusions and i bet you dont even which ones,
Burton Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 8:11 PM
had to read it again my friend for it says so much with out really saying anything at all, what do you think of my poem?
Burton Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 7:13 PM
that wrapped it up pretty much and it is so true,this poem says what we are so afraid to admit. thanks for sharing it
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November 30, 2008 at 3:47 PM
Intersting use of this concise form. Creative imagery forwards your thoughts. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen
Lakhera Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 3:45 PM
Wow this so deep. The real winter? Love, Chitra
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November 30, 2008 at 1:50 PM
Great haiku you have penned here Aaron. Love the imagery...Raul
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