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Nature Interred

Wint'ry coats mingle With dirty roads, revealing Mankind's civil sin.

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/15/2009 6:02:00 AM

'wintry/mingle/civil/sin,' ...fine short 'i' assonance. A cool HAIKU Aaron! Best wishes, Keith

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/6/2008 5:41:00 AM

[smile] in a nut shell you were right about it, LOL

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/5/2008 5:03:00 PM

my poem is telling the reader that all this working hard and follwing the rules of the life and the bible will only get you broke, hungry, and depressed, this poem is not true buts about stealing a pacaso, three other poems are the conclusions and i bet you dont even which ones,

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/4/2008 8:11:00 PM

had to read it again my friend for it says so much with out really saying anything at all, what do you think of my poem?

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/3/2008 7:13:00 PM

that wrapped it up pretty much and it is so true,this poem says what we are so afraid to admit. thanks for sharing it