Nature In Its Go

Spring dawn singing birds
blossom cool cherries around -
a new born in my hands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 23, 2013 at 5:57 AM
I kind of get it, spring is key. Of course congrats in order. I will be thinking of this one. Smiles
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July 22, 2013 at 11:37 PM
this is wonderful. I really like that last line and thinking what you are holding. Maybe your own baby, but also could be a baby lamb or some other animal of nature. lovely.
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July 22, 2013 at 2:35 PM
That is a small new born to fit in one hand..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your great win..Sara
Jones Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 12:34 PM
Very pretty picture..congratulations
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July 22, 2013 at 11:34 AM
:))Congrats on your win.
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July 22, 2013 at 6:37 AM
Jenish congrats on your excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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July 22, 2013 at 1:06 AM
- A winning haiku, with great quality Jenish - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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July 21, 2013 at 7:59 PM
hello again,, can i have 2 natures to go... :-) PD
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July 21, 2013 at 7:59 PM
Jenish :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA**
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June 26, 2013 at 11:22 AM
This has the freshness of petals........beautiful associations here. SuZ
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June 20, 2013 at 12:25 PM
Jenish, wow... love the new feeling that blossoms into another day, like a new born baby... excellent.. Linda
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June 15, 2013 at 3:10 PM
I am enjoying your haiku and would like to say welcome to Soup.
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