Jenish Somadas Poet Verse

Nature Freaking Out

Greenish meadows, stony benches
Doves and crows toilet in bunches
Huge turnout..

Without fear of baited string bides
Flying fishes in lone seasides
From hideout..

Tree top squirrels wandered bottom
Like torpor kings in their kingdom
Free rollout..

Weeds and shoots sprouting from the soil
Dormant seeds sensing human spoil
They freakout..

Birds and beasts call on us to boo
World became a big human zoo
In stakeout..

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Shirley Hawkins May 16, 2020 at 2:24 AM Sadly your sensitive muse is very true... I think this is a winner in the contest ... Jenish Somadas May 16, 2020 at 2:38 AM Thank you Shirley for your support..

Eve Roper May 15, 2020 at 9:56 PM I relate to the first one, I have a couple perching under my front porch besides all the driveway. I think people are the ones freaking out and nature enjoying life. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Jenish Somadas May 16, 2020 at 12:03 AM True..People are the one freaking out..Thank you Eve..Takecare always..

Tom Cunningham May 15, 2020 at 10:59 AM It's certainly freaking out at the moment, now we're the ones in cages. Good luck in the contest Jenish. Tom Jenish Somadas May 15, 2020 at 12:01 PM May it is the time to understand the pain of being in cages..Thank you Tom..

Vijay Pandit May 15, 2020 at 7:03 AM You certainly gave a voice to changing environment around us...humanity needs to heed your warning. All the best, Jenish. Jenish Somadas May 15, 2020 at 8:55 AM Thank you Vijay...

Beata Agustin May 15, 2020 at 6:05 AM Thanks for sharing your muse with your "environmental assertiveness" through your awesome poetic style. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you. I also appreciate your comments. Jenish Somadas May 15, 2020 at 8:54 AM Thank you Beata.. Takecare always...

Aditi Mishra May 15, 2020 at 4:59 AM A poetic take on what the world has now come to with realistic metaphors. Kudos on such a deep thought! "Flying fishes in lone seasides" reminded me of so many news articles stating that humans in hideout have led to animals breathing in their space. The world has indeed become a big human zoo. Jenish Somadas May 15, 2020 at 8:54 AM Thank you Aditi for your delightful comment.. Hope the bygone days will come again..