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Nature Freaking Out

Greenish meadows, stony benches
Doves and crows toilet in bunches
Huge turnout..

Without fear of baited string bides
Flying fishes in lone seasides
From hideout..

Tree top squirrels wandered bottom
Like torpor kings in their kingdom
Free rollout..

Weeds and shoots sprouting from the soil
Dormant seeds sensing human spoil
They freakout..

Birds and beasts call on us to boo
World became a big human zoo
In stakeout..

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Shirley Hawkins Date: 5/16/2020 2:24:00 AM Sadly your sensitive muse is very true... I think this is a winner in the contest ... Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/16/2020 2:38:00 AM Thank you Shirley for your support..

Eve Roper Date: 5/15/2020 9:56:00 PM I relate to the first one, I have a couple perching under my front porch besides all the driveway. I think people are the ones freaking out and nature enjoying life. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/16/2020 12:03:00 AM True..People are the one freaking out..Thank you Eve..Takecare always..

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/15/2020 10:59:00 AM It's certainly freaking out at the moment, now we're the ones in cages. Good luck in the contest Jenish. Tom Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/15/2020 12:01:00 PM May it is the time to understand the pain of being in cages..Thank you Tom..

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/15/2020 7:03:00 AM You certainly gave a voice to changing environment around us...humanity needs to heed your warning. All the best, Jenish. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/15/2020 8:55:00 AM Thank you Vijay...

Beata Agustin Date: 5/15/2020 6:05:00 AM Thanks for sharing your muse with your "environmental assertiveness" through your awesome poetic style. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you. I also appreciate your comments. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/15/2020 8:54:00 AM Thank you Beata.. Takecare always...

Aditi Mishra Date: 5/15/2020 4:59:00 AM A poetic take on what the world has now come to with realistic metaphors. Kudos on such a deep thought! "Flying fishes in lone seasides" reminded me of so many news articles stating that humans in hideout have led to animals breathing in their space. The world has indeed become a big human zoo. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 5/15/2020 8:54:00 AM Thank you Aditi for your delightful comment.. Hope the bygone days will come again..