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Nature Bids Goodnight

Echos reflect off nature’s beautiful sites Warmth radiates as if in spectacular flight Mysterious moonbeams sparkle so bright Kissing upon the horizons softly before night Breezes caress each dew kissed leaf The end of days much needed relief Frozen moment in time being so brief Darkness teasing with sweet mischief Mother Nature exhales a velvety sigh As the sun bids a musical good-bye The atmosphere sings it’s sweet lullaby Stars release their own muffled reply Celestial bodies begin to gently glow To produce nights soft sweet shadows Rivers and streams speak in perfect flow An ending to daylights spectacular show 8/4/2020

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Date: 8/26/2020 8:59:00 AM
A four-liner, with each former line rhyming with the following line...not an easy task. You managed it -- and managed it very well! Beautifully descriptive...lovely sounding poetry. In fond admiration. :) john
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Date: 8/7/2020 9:25:00 PM
I love the soothing romantic way it sounds, Brenda. Pure delight!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/8/2020 2:38:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!;)
Date: 8/6/2020 10:11:00 AM
I love your serene picture of twilight, Brenda - one of my favorite times of day. You highlighted each element - breezes, stars, moonbeams with such a delicate brushstroke of images. Congratulations on your first place my friend! Leaves with with a peaceful feeling!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/6/2020 10:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Sam I really appreciate your kind words!;)
Date: 8/6/2020 6:41:00 AM
I enjoyed your beautiful imagery in this piece, Bren, nicely done. Congrats on your win. Hugs, John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/6/2020 9:35:00 AM
Ah John you know that no one calls me been!;) thank you my dear friend!;)
Date: 8/5/2020 11:13:00 PM
Your beautiful writing here would be a most exquisite every night bedtime song for youngsters to be infused with.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/6/2020 9:34:00 AM
To be serenaded would be heaven! Thank you!;)
Date: 8/5/2020 4:19:00 PM
Brenda, enjoyed reading your "ending to daylights spectacular show". Congratulations on your #1 win! ~ John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/5/2020 5:05:00 PM
Ahh thank you John I did not know it was judged yet!;) appreciate your comment as always!:)
Date: 8/5/2020 1:52:00 PM
This is an exquisite write. Brenda. Well done. :D
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/5/2020 5:04:00 PM
Jeanne thank you so much!:)
Date: 8/5/2020 1:04:00 PM
Beautiful sights and sounds of eventide transitioning in to the night. Enjoyed the read, Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/5/2020 5:04:00 PM
Vijay thank you so much! As I enjoyed your comment!.)
Date: 8/5/2020 12:49:00 PM
Enchanting. I love nature - God's wonders never cease to amaze me, as does your poetry, my friend. Bless you
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/5/2020 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Gina! Always enjoy your comments!:)
Date: 8/5/2020 10:38:00 AM
Sounds like the perfect ending to a perfect day Brenda. Hope you're well Tom
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/5/2020 5:03:00 PM
Doesn’t it though Tom! And as nice as it’s been outside lately I’m the evenings would be lovely to see! Thank you Tom!:)
Date: 8/5/2020 10:18:00 AM
what a gorgeous rhyme Brenda i especially love the third stanza:-) hugs jan xx
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/5/2020 5:02:00 PM
Jan thank you so much! It’s much appreciated!;)

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