Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Nature Bids Goodnight

Echos reflect off nature’s  beautiful sites
Warmth radiates as if in spectacular flight 
Mysterious moonbeams sparkle so bright
Kissing upon the horizons softly before night

Breezes caress each dew kissed leaf
The end of days much needed relief
Frozen moment in time being so brief  
Darkness teasing with sweet mischief

Mother Nature exhales a velvety sigh
As the sun bids a musical good-bye
The atmosphere sings it’s sweet lullaby 
Stars release their own muffled reply

Celestial bodies begin to gently glow
To produce nights soft sweet shadows
Rivers and streams speak in perfect flow
An ending to daylights spectacular show

8/4/2020

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John Fleming August 26, 2020 at 8:59 AM A four-liner, with each former line rhyming with the following line...not an easy task. You managed it -- and managed it very well! Beautifully descriptive...lovely sounding poetry. In fond admiration. :) john

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2020 at 9:25 PM I love the soothing romantic way it sounds, Brenda. Pure delight! Brenda Chiri August 8, 2020 at 2:38 PM Thank you Andrea!;)

Sam Kauffman August 6, 2020 at 10:11 AM I love your serene picture of twilight, Brenda - one of my favorite times of day. You highlighted each element - breezes, stars, moonbeams with such a delicate brushstroke of images. Congratulations on your first place my friend! Leaves with with a peaceful feeling! Brenda Chiri August 6, 2020 at 10:23 AM Thank you so much Sam I really appreciate your kind words!;)

John Gondolf August 6, 2020 at 6:41 AM I enjoyed your beautiful imagery in this piece, Bren, nicely done. Congrats on your win. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri August 6, 2020 at 9:35 AM Ah John you know that no one calls me been!;) thank you my dear friend!;)

Sigrid Ermine August 5, 2020 at 11:13 PM Your beautiful writing here would be a most exquisite every night bedtime song for youngsters to be infused with. Brenda Chiri August 6, 2020 at 9:34 AM To be serenaded would be heaven! Thank you!;)

John Watt August 5, 2020 at 4:19 PM Brenda, enjoyed reading your "ending to daylights spectacular show". Congratulations on your #1 win! ~ John Brenda Chiri August 5, 2020 at 5:05 PM Ahh thank you John I did not know it was judged yet!;) appreciate your comment as always!:)

Jeanne Mcgee August 5, 2020 at 1:52 PM This is an exquisite write. Brenda. Well done. :D Brenda Chiri August 5, 2020 at 5:04 PM Jeanne thank you so much!:)

Vijay Pandit August 5, 2020 at 1:04 PM Beautiful sights and sounds of eventide transitioning in to the night. Enjoyed the read, Brenda. Brenda Chiri August 5, 2020 at 5:04 PM Vijay thank you so much! As I enjoyed your comment!.)

Regina Mcintosh August 5, 2020 at 12:49 PM Enchanting. I love nature - God's wonders never cease to amaze me, as does your poetry, my friend. Bless you Brenda Chiri August 5, 2020 at 5:03 PM Thank you Gina! Always enjoy your comments!:)

Tom Cunningham August 5, 2020 at 10:38 AM Sounds like the perfect ending to a perfect day Brenda. Hope you're well Tom Brenda Chiri August 5, 2020 at 5:03 PM Doesn’t it though Tom! And as nice as it’s been outside lately I’m the evenings would be lovely to see! Thank you Tom!:)

Jan Allison August 5, 2020 at 10:18 AM what a gorgeous rhyme Brenda i especially love the third stanza:-) hugs jan xx Brenda Chiri August 5, 2020 at 5:02 PM Jan thank you so much! It’s much appreciated!;)