Nature

authentic nature soothes my mystical spirit ... trash distracts us both April 21, 2020 Let the Pens Flow - Haiku Jenish Somadas

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/25/2020 2:01:00 AM

nature- power of veins, life and mystical choice// wise expression

Joan C. Fingon

Date: 4/24/2020 9:47:00 AM

clever little haiku the last line tells it all nice work!

Bette Bavington

Date: 4/24/2020 5:38:00 AM

Fantastic haiku. Nicely done. It brought up an image in my minds eye.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2020 8:29:00 PM

GREAT last line, that is the one that needs to be the kicker!! Hey did you call me a day or two ago. Oh, I hope we can chat tomorrow!

Donna Roberts

Date: 4/22/2020 11:33:00 PM

Spot on

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/22/2020 3:30:00 PM

Love it. My sentiments exactly! :) gw

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/22/2020 1:25:00 PM

Don't look at the ocean! Aloha! Rico

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2020 11:07:00 AM

nicely done, CayCay. Since the isolation I see people going to the park to eat their lunch, they do put it in the trash after their done, but they are getting full and the wind is just blowing it away. Stay safe and well my friend. Hugs Eve

Caycay Jennings
Date: 4/22/2020 2:19:00 PM

I don't know how to handle all the litter I see; I pull over (My Tim and I) and clean road sides because we can't take it. I even cry driving to the grocery store. It truly breaks my heart, Eve. I am well and picturing you safe within the sphere of God's perfect and loving protection - make it so, you hear? Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/22/2020 6:36:00 AM

Nothing worse to see for the eyes...a beautiful landscape filled with litter...great haiku my friend...stay safe...^WW^ :o)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/21/2020 8:42:00 PM

Great contrast! Sad though it is...