Nature

authentic nature

sooths my mystical spirit ...

trash distracts us both

earthemotionsenvironmentgravenaturehaiku

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Mahtab Bangalee

November 25, 2020 at 2:01 AM

nature- power of veins, life and mystical choice// wise expression

Joan C. Fingon

April 24, 2020 at 9:47 AM

clever little haiku the last line tells it all nice work!

Bette Bavington

April 24, 2020 at 5:38 AM

Fantastic haiku. Nicely done. It brought up an image in my minds eye.

Andrea Dietrich

April 23, 2020 at 8:29 PM

GREAT last line, that is the one that needs to be the kicker!! Hey did you call me a day or two ago. Oh, I hope we can chat tomorrow!

Donna Roberts

April 22, 2020 at 11:33 PM

Spot on

Gershon Wolf

April 22, 2020 at 3:30 PM

Love it. My sentiments exactly! :) gw

Rico Leffanta

April 22, 2020 at 1:25 PM

Don't look at the ocean! Aloha! Rico

Eve Roper

April 22, 2020 at 11:07 AM

nicely done, CayCay. Since the isolation I see people going to the park to eat their lunch, they do put it in the trash after their done, but they are getting full and the wind is just blowing it away. Stay safe and well my friend. Hugs Eve

CayCay Godwin

April 22, 2020 at 2:19 PM

I don't know how to handle all the litter I see; I pull over (My Tim and I) and clean road sides because we can't take it. I even cry driving to the grocery store. It truly breaks my heart, Eve. I am well and picturing you safe within the sphere of God's perfect and loving protection - make it so, you hear? Poetry hugs ... CayCay