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Natural Man

Imagine, if the trees could bleed and the flowers cry out in pain, Man wouldn’t worship graven images nor aspire for heaven in vain? ~Contest: Couplet Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/29/2021 8:14:00 PM

Abdul, congrats on your win with your excellent couplet! Blessings, Kim M

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/30/2021 1:48:00 PM

Thanks Kim.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/29/2021 9:08:00 AM

Congratulations Abdul on your win with your one- two punch couplet of faith.

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/29/2021 1:32:00 PM

Appreciate your comment veery much. Thanks

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/29/2021 3:48:00 AM

A short and sweet couplet. Congratulations on your win.

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/29/2021 1:32:00 PM

Thanks a lot.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/26/2021 8:23:00 PM

I can imagine it, and sometimes I think they are crying out in pain - the trees. Good luck in the contest; I think you have a fine contender!

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/27/2021 4:32:00 PM

I was trimming some branches of an over-grown crabapple tree in the backyard and felt very very uneasy. I thought of this couplet. Appreciate your comment very much, Caren.