Natural History

We got there when it opened
And we raced right up to 4.
The dinosaurs were waiting;
Some excitement was in store.

We stopped at every case and looked
As Henry posed in front.
From room to room we wandered
On a dino-fossil hunt.

Attention started flagging
So we found our way instead
To the hall of dioramas
With their animals (all dead).

Just one more thing, we pleaded.
There’s a giant big blue whale
But the patience of a 6 year old,
It seemed, would like prevail.

We zipped our coats and headed out
Before it all turned sour.
Maybe next time, we will stay
A bit more than an hour!
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Wolf Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 1:15 PM
Ha, ha! Such a great ending -- 'a more than an hour.' Recalls Alan Sherman 'Hello Muddah, Hello Faddah,' Camp Granada Song: After poison ivy and ptomaine poisoning and rainstorms...and then: I've been here one whole day! Smiles, Gershon
Rigoler Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Never been to the Smithsonian to see its collection of prehistoric creatures – except in books or Internet. For a boy of six it must have been a sight to see, or maybe fear? / M
Leffanta Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 3:28 PM
You perfectly described my outing with my granddaughter at the Los Angeles Museum of Natural History! Aloha! Rico
Krutsinger Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 2:34 AM
This is hilarious Ilene, and so true to LIFE! So REAL! Loved it!
Somadas Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 1:10 AM
##But the patience of a 6 year old, It seemed, would like prevail.## Quickly they got interested and quickly they lose it.. Nice poem..
Na Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 7:58 PM
Wonderful piece Ilene. We love going to Dinosaur museums. I enjoy looking at fossils and just the history of them. Thanks for sharing this
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