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Natural Draw

In the attraction of Nature's-draw, will my heart survive such beauty attracting with its maw- sitting beneath impending- melting offering -cascade of Winters drift encore of grift, scenic spring undressing the thaws, trap of heart's thoughts warmly clad, hanging cliffs, gardens of Babylon- bathed on the lips to wear like an entance, of entanced shades in scarlet riding beast of glade. There is no choice but to plunge from the cliffs and be submerged in the surround cloud lay. The sting of cold anenome of taboo anamoly of anamorphic fish eye lens o drone , 'saulted wound of surrounding detergent urge of soliloquy-posed like a babbling brook sent into motion by the everclear projected beast mode of the know, seeps in to santize the drowning pool you have inked beyond the greatest show on err, pearls of evaluation of sanity- so audaciously an enchantress come for the bones on our shores for an innocent suare', wears the beads like a rosary, pray for me. She will have evidence to use against me on Judgment Day, beyond and keep part of me sentenced upon this plane, stowaways, mistress and vagabond.

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Date: 3/10/2024 12:38:00 PM
Your poem poem offers a vivid and evocative portrayal of the powerful allure and inevitable surrender to the mesmerizing beauty of nature... The language of the poem is rich and visceral, inviting readers to experience the sensory overload of the natural world. From the sting of cold anemone to the surrounding urge of soliloquy, each word paints a vivid portrait of the speaker's internal struggle against the overwhelming forces of nature.
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Jude Herrick
Date: 3/10/2024 12:59:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One.
Date: 3/9/2024 6:20:00 PM
Thank you, all for reading and cheering our "place to exist on, in epic love and gratitude, (that I know as Poets, you will, do)" When there is a new Heaven and a new Earth, I am hoping the soil from our first place to be is transplanted, so that her beauty and evidence against us is not used (memories), not missing, where families first meet, not missing her who carries us. I believe she is God's little sweetheart, that which he took his time with in a poetic romance, truly unique in the Universe. I would never want to say goodbye to her and her beauty or the living stories she will forever be tied to.
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Date: 3/9/2024 5:25:00 PM
Hello Jude, I really like how yo evoke a whirlwind of emotions and imagery, swirling through the depths of nature's allure and the complexities of human existence. Each line is a journey, inviting me the reader to plunge into the depths of beauty and uncertainty. Your words are filled with raw intensity, capturing the essence of longing and introspection. Through your poetic lens, I glimpse at the intricate dance between desire and reality, vulnerability and strength. This is a captivating piece that transcends the ordinary. - Blessings, Daniel
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Jude Herrick
Date: 3/10/2024 12:58:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel.

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