Natural Disparity

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dawn sky for painters bright blue skies and bleak gray woods distant conspire scheme glistening sunshine illuminates the wide space crimson rubber pipe winter leaf debris respiring in forming lake Wheels flood the walkers

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2022 3:32:00 PM

when you wrote wheels flood the walkers, I was imagining my husband's "walker" he used when he first had a hard time walking after his injury. Anyway, that last haiku was my favorite of the three.

Sotto Poet
Date: 12/4/2022 3:50:00 PM

I appreciate your thoughtfulness, Andrea. I'm sure you got the meaning at first glance since "wheels' is used instead of "cars". I'm glad you enjoy it and I pray that Mr. Walker is still doing well.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2022 11:29:00 AM

Yes, those leaves can act as a dam and hold back enough water to interfere with wheels passing on through. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/4/2022 7:58:00 AM

Impressive works of art, my dearest, Lasaad! Be blessed!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/4/2022 5:22:00 AM

Great haikus.