Natural Disparity

dawn sky for painters
bright blue skies and bleak gray woods
distant conspire scheme

glistening sunshine
illuminates the wide space
crimson rubber pipe

winter leaf debris
respiring in forming lake 
Wheels flood the walkers

analogyappreciationwinterhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2022 at 3:32 PM

when you wrote wheels flood the walkers, I was imagining my husband's "walker" he used when he first had a hard time walking after his injury. Anyway, that last haiku was my favorite of the three.

Sotto Poet

December 4, 2022 at 3:50 PM

I appreciate your thoughtfulness, Andrea. I'm sure you got the meaning at first glance since "wheels' is used instead of "cars". I'm glad you enjoy it and I pray that Mr. Walker is still doing well.

Sara Kendrick

December 4, 2022 at 11:29 AM

Yes, those leaves can act as a dam and hold back enough water to interfere with wheels passing on through. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara