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Natural Disaster

The fierce tidal wave Roaring raw Sweeping as it goes. The outburst of ruin Deadly heat Welcomed by thunder. Fire and brimstone rain Unquenched burns Natural killing. Natural they are... Disaster May God save our souls. VERSE FORM - LUNE

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Date: 6/11/2013 7:03:00 PM
I liked the flow of the imagery. The capitalization and the periods bothered me, they are what the kids would call 'old school' and the stanzas are not complete thoughts which is fine but then there is no need for a period. Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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