Sidney Beck Poet Haiku

Natural and Beyond

NATURAL   AND   BEYOND


(Haiku)

Noble tree critter
Never feels proud or bitter
No epigram fitter




(Senryu)

Looks like uncle Joe?
Each is a handsome so-and-so
Could be God’s plan you know


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Written for John Freeman’s  Contest   “Natural and Beyond!!”

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Kash Poet August 29, 2011 at 9:57 PM Congrats Sydney on your win in john's contest.

Sara Kendrick August 29, 2011 at 6:20 PM Congrats on your creative's work's win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta August 29, 2011 at 5:59 PM Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John, sydney

Caryl Muzzey August 29, 2011 at 4:16 PM Congratulations Sydney on your third place win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire August 29, 2011 at 3:03 PM Oh, got a great chuckle from your entry, Syd. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown August 29, 2011 at 7:35 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in John Moses Freeman's "Natural and Beyond" contest Syd. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 28, 2011 at 10:39 PM cute ones and I see just now that you got a placement. I need to check out what i got with mine. Thanks for your flattering comment on my poetry, Sydney. Let me go now to see your part two.

John Freeman August 28, 2011 at 9:34 PM Congratulations on your third place Sydney. A worthy presentation. Agape, Moses

Nancy Jones August 28, 2011 at 8:33 PM Hey! I thought you said somewhere that you don't do these...well, one of us is mistaken.. you DO do these... really wonderfully! WTG, Syd!! Happy day ~N

Dr.Ram Mehta August 27, 2011 at 5:48 PM Liked the phrase epigram fitter and very hilarious senryu, sydney

Kash Poet August 27, 2011 at 5:25 PM Haha..enjoyed the humour here Sydney...best wishes.