Nathan's Song

*Nathan's Song

Nathan loved to be playin' baseball
Talk with his friends everytime they'd call
He would rather be doing for others---any day.
Nathan loved the lake in the Summer,
Skiing in winter--one slope or other.
He was full of life and had an easy goin' way.

Nathan loved to eat Mexican food,
Jelly beans, when he was in the mood.
He would rather wear his flip-flops than shoes--everyday.
Nathan loved dogs and playin' guitar,
All kinds of music--he was a star!
His heart was full of love and he showed it every way.

You were my joy...You were my joy...
You were my joy...You were my boy.

Nathan loved to laugh and be funny,
His impish grin was on the money:
He dressed up like a 'Sugar Daddy' at school that day.
Nathan loved his family and friends
Especially one girl---to the end...
And his death was full of life by what he gave away.

Though he's gone from our presence, he walks with Jesus hand in hand
And now, up in Heaven, Jesus says, "Well Done, Nathan...

You are my joy...You are my joy...
You are my joy...You are my boy."

by Deborah Burch©11/8/2006

For: PD's contest of sorrows and make you cry poem

*Note: Nathan was a senior in high school 6 years ago, the son of my BFF. He was killed in a MVA; his girlfriend was driving, ran a stop sign and a tractor trailer truck hit them broadside on Nathan's side of the car. The other 3 in the car lived...as did the driver of the truck...he had just talked to his mom on the cell phone--which was never found...I wrote this as a song and sang it for them as my gift...It doesn't end there:
Nathan was an organ donor. Many lives have been saved because Nathan donated all he had left to give--the gift of life. This year his Mom will get to meet the recipients and they intern meet her...She, with the Red Cross, hold Blood Drives each year in Memory of Nathan: 'One Love Blood Drive'...This poem is dedicated to Nathan, and to the awareness that we can all save lives...
Donate blood...and be an organ donor...be someone's joy. love,deb
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 4/12/2012 6:02:00 PM
Wonderful piece and tribute to a great personality ,Deb.Thanks for this dedication and congratulations on your win...Kudos to you...Pal
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/12/2012 6:05:00 PM
Thank you so much for you kindness...I am honoured,Pal...big huggss,love deb
Date: 4/10/2012 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Emotional" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2012 11:51:00 AM
Deb, congrats on your win, very moving..David
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Date: 4/10/2012 10:20:00 AM
congrats on your win.. cory
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Date: 4/10/2012 10:05:00 AM
Deborah, congratulations with your emotional poem! Thank you very much for sharing something so emotional with us. Some poems, are tough to express and share out in the open. God Bless. Always~ PD
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/10/2012 5:16:00 PM
Thank you so much ~PD...for having this contest...catharsis is painful, however needed...and thank you so much for my win I am truely honoured!! and greatful! BIG HUG (((((o))))) love,deb
Date: 4/10/2012 4:10:00 AM
Yes we can all save lives..Lately on my island a man was in need of a kidney transplant.. many donors offered to test if they are a match to donate one of their kidney,and these people are still alive.... We can save many lives,with a little bit of concern..touched my heart..Charma
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Date: 4/5/2012 9:10:00 PM
wow...pd
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/5/2012 9:16:00 PM
Thank you pd... love,deb
Date: 4/5/2012 7:33:00 PM
This is a wonderful story of a tragedy! I just love how you told the story with as much of a positive spin as possible! I think you did a magnificent job with you poem! I really enjoyed your write that I have read this evening! This is a lovely write! Great Work!!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/5/2012 9:14:00 PM
Thank you Russell. Very much my friend.love deb
Date: 4/5/2012 8:52:00 AM
Deborah, this is a wonderful, touching tribute to Nathan. Thank you for sharing his story. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/5/2012 9:14:00 PM
Thanks Kim. Thank you for all your congrats and big congrats to you in your wins big huggss my friend,love deb
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