Sarita Milliner Poet Rhyme

Nakedness

Nakedness

Our minds view the world through its nakedness,
Not aided by instruments of any kind.
A blank canvas of nothingness, 
Speckled vastly with abstract designs.
Like staring into a toy kaleidoscope, 
Creations hidden, behind the mind’s eye that’s blind.

Written © 11/13/2016

Submitted for: Naked Poetry Contest

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Daniel Turner November 13, 2016 at 10:00 AM A beautiful thought Mrs Sarita. Unfortunately everyone doesn't look through a poet's eyes. Sarita Milliner November 13, 2016 at 10:11 AM Thank you Daniel, your point is well taken, but thankfully We Poets do. (((((Cyber hugs)))))

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2016 at 9:44 AM This is very insightful, Sarita. I like your approach to the theme. Sarita Milliner November 13, 2016 at 10:13 AM Thanks Andrea, I look at thing quite differently than most! ;-)