Naked Reality

Like a violet sprig
Sturdy love strives to linger -
Will someday wither.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Devnath  Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 11:15 AM
Nice haiku read from you my lovely poet friend. Loved always,bl
Dhaou Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 12:12 PM
Thanks heaps BL Devnath ! I am really glad you liked it !
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 11:45 PM
Oh, it is sad and I hope not always true. Very beautiful metaphor.
Dhaou Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 12:14 PM
Thanks heaps Andrea Dietrich ! Your poems are real sources of inspiration so richly loaded with gorgeous poetic devices !
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 11:47 AM
What a delightful haiku:-) Hugs jan xx
Dhaou Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 12:18 PM
Thanks a bunch Jan Allison ! Hugs,too !
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