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Naked reality

Like a violet sprig Sturdy love strives to linger - Will someday wither.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/26/2015 11:15:00 AM
Nice haiku read from you my lovely poet friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:12:00 PM
Thanks heaps BL Devnath ! I am really glad you liked it !
Date: 1/22/2015 11:45:00 PM
Oh, it is sad and I hope not always true. Very beautiful metaphor.
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:14:00 PM
Thanks heaps Andrea Dietrich ! Your poems are real sources of inspiration so richly loaded with gorgeous poetic devices !
Date: 1/22/2015 12:25:00 AM
Haiku magic.. You've written a masterpiece!
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thanks Lyric Man for your uplifting comments! I have read some of the verses you've concocted and I can say I was really spoiled !
Date: 1/21/2015 11:47:00 AM
What a delightful haiku:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:18:00 PM
Thanks a bunch Jan Allison ! Hugs,too !