Naked In Front of You

What would you do,
if I were to stand naked in front of you?
Would you laugh and tear me apart,
if I were to show you my real heart?
Would you find it too dark to face,
or would you find my mind a beautiful place?
If I were to stand in front of you fully exposed,
would you take that journey with me if proposed?
Would you hold my hand or let go,
if you found out about my pain and sorrow?
Would you kiss away the tears,
or would you further feed my fears?
Would you follow me to the depths of my imagination?
Could you handle the ramification?
What would you do,
if I were to stand naked in front of you?

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Date: 8/1/2017 2:31:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, I assume that you re talking that what will you do if I fully expose myelf, it isn t clothes, it s the heart and everything what you re hiding,right? Well it was reall beautifully written and I really enjoyed reading it however do me a favour, plz read my poems I ve brought the permission from the God to love you and the last love letter to your girlfriend and tell me how they are, I ll really appreciate your time
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Date: 4/13/2016 5:02:00 AM
A great write from u. U are so emotional. It is truely reached my heart. 7 out of 7. Keep it up...........with love
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Jessica Rogers
Date: 4/13/2016 2:25:00 PM
Can i just say how awesome you are! Thank you so much :)
Date: 4/5/2016 4:17:00 PM
I really like this. Questions I have often asked. It's easy to love someone when they strong but to love them at their weakest is true love.
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Jessica Rogers
Date: 4/5/2016 6:08:00 PM
Its like the song, can you stand the rain. Thanks for reading
Date: 4/5/2016 1:43:00 PM
Great little poignant write, well formatted, flows easy, rhymes don't seem too forced....well done..
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Jessica Rogers
Date: 4/5/2016 2:16:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 4/5/2016 12:32:00 PM
To totally open up and expose yourself is truly a scary thought. Well done
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Jessica Rogers
Date: 4/5/2016 2:15:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words!
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