Naked

Back against the wall 
blasted on a canvas 
camouflaged trigger thoughts
subliminal mind control 
incase you wonder who you are
bags beneath my eyes 
followed an illusion
on a trip with a suitcase
turned my back without saying goodbye
Now its Passion on the image 
with a cross over my heart
I go Gambit on the cards 
Imagine dragon conversations 
Im fluent gasoline combustion when i talk
Polluting life's a chamber 
Filter trap Martial arts.
Mechanical malfunction 
Grind my gears 
but ill feel sorry for ya'll
Tears turn salt 
Thats a turn off 
The sweat on my forehead needs a job
Hustle dont forfit 
Victory is sweeter than revenge 
I go raw never orange 
Its important to have rules 
Its expensive when its imported 
Get a message across the world 
They're trying to solitaire it in one suit 
But the truth is naked adam and eves forbidden fruit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/16/2015 1:56:00 PM
Fernando, you are far and deep with this poem. So much to the solid truth. I like it. SKAT
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Date: 5/19/2015 4:11:00 AM
thank u skat. nice of u
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