Naive Lover

Sitting beside the window pane
I wandered around the memory lane

Springing from the midnight dark
you struck my heart like a spark

The pain surged as tears rolled
saw you smiling on top of the world

I screamed as you started moving
but you faded away so uncaring

I ran behind you like a cart
still finding you a mile apart

You stopped and fleered at me
kneeling down I gazed you only

Your eyes as clear as sunshine
saying you naive lover of mine

Then you vanished in my mind
and I felt the cold dawn wind

Wiping my tears I saw the sun
that never forgets to move on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/21/2013 7:52:00 PM
about your poem: I love the set of couplets you have here... ((couplets is what you call this form)) Robin, a very sad thought and start of a new day... xox~LINDA
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Date: 1/21/2013 7:22:00 PM
Robin, stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV *LINDA
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Date: 1/20/2013 5:27:00 PM
Nice featured poem~SKAT
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Date: 1/20/2013 9:26:00 AM
Robin, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 1/10/2013 7:05:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Robin! Pleasant with the "new poets", you write very well. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Have a enjoyable day - Love from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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