Shadow Hamilton Poet Acrostic

Nairobi Acrostic Contest

N ows here the place Joy Adams was chased
A s the lion cubs let loose followed her scent
I n haste through stores and stalls in riotous glee
R ight to her they led George he begged her to stay
O utwitted in her ploy to go she tried again to leave
B ut the lion cubs sure had other ideas and circled her
I nstead she found  that no way could she leave them 

written 09/19/2013

contest skipping six,Going Straight to Seven- Acrostics challenge #3

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Susan Palli October 23, 2013 at 2:05 PM Nice imagery Shadow Hamilton October 23, 2013 at 5:57 PM hi Susan Ty for nice review and your precious time spent reading Shadow x smile

Bl Devnath September 20, 2013 at 10:21 AM Wonderful acrostic poem with a short story penned well. Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl Shadow Hamilton September 20, 2013 at 2:50 PM Ty BL as usual your review is very inspiring Shadow x smile

Arthur Vaso September 20, 2013 at 7:59 AM Beautiful poem! Loved it!

Sandra Adams September 19, 2013 at 6:26 PM love how this one tells the story...great write...good luck in the contest :) Shadow Hamilton September 20, 2013 at 2:56 PM hi Sandra a great book and film when I choose Nairobi I thought of many things I could write but the cubs chasing Joy through the street stall and store is unforgettable especially when one has stayed there many times Ty for lovely review and luck wishes Shadow x smile

Nette Onclaud September 19, 2013 at 12:36 PM not only is this imaginative but downright vivid... a fine story this one weaves, shadow..:) huggs Shadow Hamilton September 19, 2013 at 3:48 PM it was filmed in Living Free It also did happen lol. Ty Nette for reading Shadow x smile