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Nairobi Acrostic Contest

N ows here the place Joy Adams was chased A s the lion cubs let loose followed her scent I n haste through stores and stalls in riotous glee R ight to her they led George he begged her to stay O utwitted in her ploy to go she tried again to leave B ut the lion cubs sure had other ideas and circled her I nstead she found that no way could she leave them written 09/19/2013 contest skipping six,Going Straight to Seven- Acrostics challenge #3

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Susan Palli

Date: 10/23/2013 2:05:00 PM

Nice imagery

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/23/2013 5:57:00 PM

hi Susan Ty for nice review and your precious time spent reading Shadow x smile

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/20/2013 10:21:00 AM

Wonderful acrostic poem with a short story penned well. Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/20/2013 2:50:00 PM

Ty BL as usual your review is very inspiring Shadow x smile

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/20/2013 7:59:00 AM

Beautiful poem! Loved it!

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/19/2013 6:26:00 PM

love how this one tells the story...great write...good luck in the contest :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/20/2013 2:56:00 PM

hi Sandra a great book and film when I choose Nairobi I thought of many things I could write but the cubs chasing Joy through the street stall and store is unforgettable especially when one has stayed there many times Ty for lovely review and luck wishes Shadow x smile

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2013 12:36:00 PM

not only is this imaginative but downright vivid... a fine story this one weaves, shadow..:) huggs

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/19/2013 3:48:00 PM

it was filmed in Living Free It also did happen lol. Ty Nette for reading Shadow x smile