Mywalking Stick

There is a big Eucalyptus tree right behind where I live
The trunk is large, with the branches straight and long
When the Arizona Sun is blazing down, makes nice shade
Even when branches die, they still have more to give
At sunset, a breeze will blow through the leaves like a song
The day is over and dues are paid

One recent summer's eve, storm clouds boiled in the West
A quick sand storm, lighting and thunder everywhere
A hard driving rain all night, streets ran bank to bank
The old tree stood fast, passed the test
A dead twisted limb laid on the ground, like saying a prayer
For the state that it was in, had only God to thank

Out of bed at five, hot cup of coffee in my hand
Went outside to make an overall inspection
Was everything still standing, or had everything washed away?
The early morning air was fresh, rain had bathed the land
Looked up and down the street, then in a westerly direction
The old fallen branch, there it lay

It caught my eye, seemed to be the right size
From past work injuries, my knees would go out every now and then
The branch needed a friend and I needed a walking stick
Picked it up,it was around waist high, I knew I had a prize
My work was cut out, had to give a new skin
Some sand paper, couple coats of varnish would do the trick

Took off the old gray scale, down to yellow wood with brown grain
Patched the cracks, so it would not split, couple of wraps of bailing wire
By God, it was starting to show some character
We started to smile and I had a good cane
Like a miracle, saved from the fire
Now as one, we walk together

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/8/2011 7:23:00 PM
Had to read it again, thankyou.
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Date: 7/27/2011 6:13:00 PM
I so enjoyed reading this poem again after all this time! thankyou again Danny.
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Date: 12/31/2009 3:51:00 AM
God is like that with his people. He has to do some work on us so "Now as one, we walk together". Great write on a great topic. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/27/2009 8:32:00 PM
Awesome Danny! What a picture and a message all captured in this great write, goes to my fav today. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem and thank you for your friendship. God bless, Caroline.
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Date: 12/26/2009 6:03:00 PM
Another nice little story. YOu are definitely a storyteller, Danny, and that is why I don't think you need to write these as poems. I took all my story "poems" and made little changes so they would read as prose and am currently working on my own flash story chapbook.("Only in a Different Life" is in it, but in different format) I bet you could come up with such a book yourself. I know a great publisher who has published several great books for me. Let me know if you want info!! Andrea
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Date: 12/26/2009 8:59:00 AM
very well done, Danny. I enjoy finding just the right walking stick also. Yes it does sort of feel like a companion.
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Date: 12/26/2009 2:54:00 AM
With just a few edits, it is awesome.. Great job, so simple.
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