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Mystique of Sandcastles

DOUBLE HAIKU

iguanas, shells, stars
sipping dust multiplied thrice
earth shapes zig-zagged clay

chameleon grains 
silver buckets dot dash dot
sandcastles baptize!

(( for S*K*A*T's  sand castles contest))

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2015 9:55:00 AM

NETTE , Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Daver Austin

Date: 1/26/2015 10:51:00 AM

Had to read this one many times, but it was well worth it the contents of your sand castle. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/15/2011 5:14:00 AM

this is a very interesting double haiku, nette! quick soupmail :)

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 12/12/2010 4:47:00 AM

A win well-deserved. awesomely written!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Nette in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Cecil Hickman

Date: 12/6/2010 10:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,,a deeply imaginative write for sure,,,and thank you for your visits to my words and for your very special words that you left behind,,Blessings..Cecil

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:43:00 PM

Congratulations on this fantastic place in the contest, Nette. LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/6/2010 5:45:00 PM

where my SOUP MAIL tickle...(not haiku honey bun but good!)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:19:00 PM

Congrats nette on another top win in Irma's contest on sandcastles with this rare beauty entry my friend.. enjoy your big win with luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 10:13:00 AM

Congrats Nette on winning 2nd place-kashinath

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/6/2010 9:17:00 AM

many great wishes on this placement Nette.

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:06:00 AM

Congrats.Nette on your 2nt place win. Gagape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/6/2010 7:38:00 AM

Another outstanding poem from you, Nette!! Terrific writing and imagination....Congratulations!! love, Carrie

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 4:20:00 AM

Excellent win !!!! so much enjoyed your entry, took me right to the beach...luv Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:06:00 AM

Congratulations on this second place win in the contest of Skat, nette

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 12/5/2010 11:21:00 PM

Many Congrats Nette for notching up 2nd spot in winners list with this beautiful depiction of sandcastles............... Luv/Best wishes always ....Hitendra Mehta

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/5/2010 11:02:00 PM

hi Nette, these are superb, enjoyed, congrats on your winner in the contest. Harry

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:21:00 PM

Nette~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/5/2010 8:29:00 PM

Nette this is awesome. Love it. Many congratulations dear friend for this success.

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/5/2010 3:55:00 PM

i think this is a unique piece Nette, good wishes in the contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2010 2:05:00 PM

Good one ..Reads like a winner to me..Glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/5/2010 12:08:00 PM

your work is always so original. .Congrat on your placing on'haiku me a xmas tree',i loved yours more than mine,it was my favorite. .and Nette this is another great entry. .the imagery you use is great.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/5/2010 9:30:00 AM

Very cute haiku, Nette. Saw the "iguanas" and wonder if you live in Mexico. I have seen them in South Florida too though. I like the way you describe the beach. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/5/2010 9:08:00 AM

Nice images of the nouns convulging the meanings, nette

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/5/2010 8:14:00 AM

Nice word usage here... best wishes in the contest....always Michael