Nette Onclaud Poet Haiku

Mystique of Sandcastles

DOUBLE HAIKU

iguanas, shells, stars
sipping dust multiplied thrice
earth shapes zig-zagged clay

chameleon grains 
silver buckets dot dash dot
sandcastles baptize!

(( for S*K*A*T's  sand castles contest))

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Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2015 at 9:55 AM NETTE , Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Daver Austin January 26, 2015 at 10:51 AM Had to read this one many times, but it was well worth it the contents of your sand castle. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 15, 2011 at 5:14 AM this is a very interesting double haiku, nette! quick soupmail :)

Nicole Sharon Brown December 12, 2010 at 4:47 AM A win well-deserved. awesomely written!

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2010 at 5:37 AM Congratulations on your win Nette in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Cecil Hickman December 6, 2010 at 10:10 PM Congratulations on your win,,a deeply imaginative write for sure,,,and thank you for your visits to my words and for your very special words that you left behind,,Blessings..Cecil

Andrea Dietrich December 6, 2010 at 9:43 PM Congratulations on this fantastic place in the contest, Nette. LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi December 6, 2010 at 5:45 PM where my SOUP MAIL tickle...(not haiku honey bun but good!)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 6, 2010 at 3:19 PM Congrats nette on another top win in Irma's contest on sandcastles with this rare beauty entry my friend.. enjoy your big win with luv..

Kash Poet December 6, 2010 at 10:13 AM Congrats Nette on winning 2nd place-kashinath

Joe Maverick December 6, 2010 at 9:17 AM many great wishes on this placement Nette.

John Freeman December 6, 2010 at 8:06 AM Congrats.Nette on your 2nt place win. Gagape, Moses

Carrie Richards December 6, 2010 at 7:38 AM Another outstanding poem from you, Nette!! Terrific writing and imagination....Congratulations!! love, Carrie

Michael J. Falotico December 6, 2010 at 4:20 AM Excellent win !!!! so much enjoyed your entry, took me right to the beach...luv Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta December 6, 2010 at 2:06 AM Congratulations on this second place win in the contest of Skat, nette

Dr Hitendra Mehta December 5, 2010 at 11:21 PM Many Congrats Nette for notching up 2nd spot in winners list with this beautiful depiction of sandcastles............... Luv/Best wishes always ....Hitendra Mehta

Harry Horsman December 5, 2010 at 11:02 PM hi Nette, these are superb, enjoyed, congrats on your winner in the contest. Harry

Skat A December 5, 2010 at 9:21 PM Nette~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Tahera Mannan December 5, 2010 at 8:29 PM Nette this is awesome. Love it. Many congratulations dear friend for this success.

Joe Maverick December 5, 2010 at 3:55 PM i think this is a unique piece Nette, good wishes in the contest.

Sara Kendrick December 5, 2010 at 2:05 PM Good one ..Reads like a winner to me..Glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

C.C Bloomsfield December 5, 2010 at 12:08 PM your work is always so original. .Congrat on your placing on'haiku me a xmas tree',i loved yours more than mine,it was my favorite. .and Nette this is another great entry. .the imagery you use is great.

Carolyn Devonshire December 5, 2010 at 9:30 AM Very cute haiku, Nette. Saw the "iguanas" and wonder if you live in Mexico. I have seen them in South Florida too though. I like the way you describe the beach. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta December 5, 2010 at 9:08 AM Nice images of the nouns convulging the meanings, nette

Michael J. Falotico December 5, 2010 at 8:14 AM Nice word usage here... best wishes in the contest....always Michael