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Mystical Rain

Beautiful lights that glare before me, Magic delights you allow me to be. Mystical Rain in the sky up above, Mystical Rain throwing stardust of love. A surreal sight as I stand and adore, Leading the way - so that men reach the shore. Mystical Rain in the air all around, Mystical Rain making love without sound. Marvelous specks of desire in my view, Lightly you peck at my face as the dew. Mystical Rain; blue metallic and green. Mystical Rain; play your tune quite serene. A show so alive as you dart through the sky, Helping planes through the mist, where pilots do fly. Mystical Rain; shine your light in my path. Mystical Rain warm my heart; causing me to laugh. Editing by Lindsay Laurie

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Date: 11/30/2008 5:56:00 AM
Dear Astrid - Congratulations on your 2 poems making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/1/2008 7:38:00 PM
Astrid two to the finals and both understandably so - great poems - Congratulations - God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 5:46:00 AM
Warmest congrats Ivy on your poems making it through the first round! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/26/2008 1:39:00 PM
Congrats on making it through the first round.
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