Mystical Night

Sunlight
           Sunny brightness
    falling,changing,disappearing
        sun sunshine,dark,glow
    breaking darkening,happening
             dark, beautiful
                 Moonlight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/27/2009 1:52:00 AM
Lovely Description=)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/26/2009 2:08:00 PM
Nothing missing from the the genre ... congratulations for the mastery.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/26/2009 1:54:00 PM
typing error, so sorry
Login to Reply
Date: 6/26/2009 1:46:00 PM
Creative use of this challenging form. Nice imagery. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things