Mystical Night

Sunlight
           Sunny brightness
    falling,changing,disappearing
        sun sunshine,dark,glow
    breaking darkening,happening
             dark, beautiful
                 Moonlight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Al-Riyami Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 1:52 AM
Lovely Description=)
Shango Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 2:08 PM
Nothing missing from the the genre ... congratulations for the mastery.
Null Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 1:54 PM
typing error, so sorry
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June 26, 2009 at 1:46 PM
Creative use of this challenging form. Nice imagery. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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