Mystic Moon

Dark of night, enchanting tune running freely beneath a mystic moon

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The Melody Sings

Date: 2/22/2010 11:29:00 AM

Nice one!

Brian Strand

Date: 6/12/2008 1:24:00 AM

Yes indeed Lana my haiku had more than one meaning.including the reference to Ivy being a girl's name Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome observations and compliment

Austin Reynolds

Date: 6/11/2008 5:39:00 AM

Beautiful music, Alana. The short writes are so introspective. Amazing what can be said in 16 or 17 syllables. Thanks for reading my Summer Music. BIG LOVE, Austin

Brian Strand

Date: 6/11/2008 12:39:00 AM

You have a gift for this form Alana.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind encouraging words.

Marycile Beer

Date: 6/10/2008 7:25:00 PM

A very picturesque poem, Alana. If I think back to a younger day I can relate to these words. Keep up the good work. God Bless, Cile