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Mystic Magnetic Fascination

Mystic magnetic fascination
is a shared enthrall;
kin to emancipation, 
it is wired in us all.

A connection internal 
serves as our one true voice
and stirs emotions supernal -
in this we have no choice.

Nature is unparalleled in
gifting divine intel
for it provokes intoxication
in each soul’s swell.

We spiritually dwell as 
we feel deeply compelled
to exalt admiration with 
grateful declarations.



... CayCay
July 26, 2019
For contest FINE TUNE THIS COLLABORATION sponsored by Line Gauthier
(Title) AFFINITY WITH NATURE / Line’s lines (poem shows them in Italic):
Magnetic fascination
Kin to emancipation
A connection internal
Stirs emotions supernal
Nature is unparalleled  
Provokes intoxication
As we feel deeply compelled
To exalt admiration

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/5/2019 5:58:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. Love the title, CayCay. Congrats.
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Date: 7/27/2019 8:38:00 PM
I like the way you wove your words around his, it blends together perfectly as all well done collaborations should! Beautiful poem :) hugs
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Date: 7/27/2019 3:30:00 PM
When a moment connects in a wonderful way--- it is fascinating. Magical, Mysterious and even Magnetic. Such a beautiful collaboration between you both. Your thoughts caress the page with grace. :) Brandy
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Date: 7/27/2019 3:20:00 PM
Great piece CayCay, full of wonderful imagery and sweet rhyme. So very well penned.
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Date: 7/27/2019 1:03:00 PM
Hi CayCay, You did an amazing job with contest challenge. I really liked the last stanza. It looks like a winner to. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/27/2019 12:51:00 PM
Great write my friend, should score high in her contest. Thank you so much for reading my poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/27/2019 9:37:00 AM
This is a very talented take on the contest theme..I am impressed by what you wrote, CayCay..excellent write.
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Date: 7/27/2019 6:24:00 AM
cay...cayYou did this very well
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Date: 7/27/2019 5:03:00 AM
You've done a brilliant job with this one CayCay. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 7/27/2019 3:18:00 AM
A little something like love...Nice write using the lines...All the best
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Date: 7/27/2019 12:23:00 AM
Love your admiration & declarations CayCay...we need more of that my friend...bottle it up and let's sell it lol...sending empty bottles with corks lol...^WW^ :o)
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