Fathima Dawood Poet Couplet

Mystic

I venture forth in this wood unknown
Trembling inside this greenery overgrown
I trustingly advance each step foreward
Inching towards my fate unguarded
Lowering my gaze somewhat subdued
I spy my rainbow my future I view
Longing future wisdom spiralling notions
My lusty prelude to imagination enthrown!

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Chitra Lakhera October 11, 2008 at 6:49 AM Each line was so majestic. Wonderful write Fathima.Ah we all wish that, don't we? Love, Chitra

Patrick Wakefield October 11, 2008 at 3:25 AM Let the images be clue to the idea you are trying to convey. The point of metaphor is to not tell your reader what you mean. If that's what you were going for.

Christopher Higgins October 11, 2008 at 3:23 AM I love this poem and the line I spy my rainbow my future I view. This is very well written. I am longing future wisdom so that I can know the paths to take in life. Nice work.