Mystery of Primal Spirit

I feel your need to romp on twilight's climb
despite the consequences life can claim,
you know my velvet touch can make you pine
I am mystery you know by first name.
Through hours we will groan a sinless prayer
and think of nothing more than primal flesh,
sensing how deeply you think... I am rare
a warm appetite that brings hearts refreshed. 

If you accept desire's sweet effect
and choose wild abandon for fire's release,
then plunge with me until grasslands are wrecked
as stripe of innocent love climbs and heaves.
But before we complete our final song,
can't gushing heat douse instant passion's heed?
To covet me... tenderly to prolong 
my tigress’ spirit by grace will concede.



      .................
Your First 2014 Poem Contest of PD
By nette onclaud
* Use of few slant/ end rhymes is intentional
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 2/12/2014 8:40:00 AM
This is even better the 3rd time. Great going. SKAt
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Date: 1/28/2014 3:50:00 PM
Nette, CONGRATULATIONS, a very clever write, you did well in "Personifying Any Animal of Your Choosing" *enjoyed every poem.......... ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/8/2014 7:58:00 AM
Another wonderful win with a wonderful poem. Congrats.....Hugs....Roger
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Date: 1/7/2014 3:33:00 PM
Nette, . Congratulations, and thank you for entering my contest. It has been a delight hosting so many contests. If you like you can enjoy the hugs, I left all winning poems on my blog "I WILL BE FAITHFUL." link-------> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18505&PoetID=18720 <----- Enjoy and stop by if you'd like...... Always & Forever ** LINDA
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Date: 1/5/2014 12:57:00 AM
Enjoyed the personification and congrats on your win, nette
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Date: 1/2/2014 6:41:00 PM
Wowie.......this one is rather warm to the touch!! Grrrrrrrr!! lol ! Loved it! Ps.......thanks so much dear Nette, for my placement in your Hands contest! I'm so pleased you liked it!
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Date: 1/2/2014 7:36:00 AM
Interesting way to go with the contest..Reads like winning material to me..That tigress is very passionate..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/2/2014 2:56:00 AM
- A little different poem from you, Nette - you do each topic interesting and beautiful !!! - Luck in contest !!! - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2014 12:52:00 AM
Enjoyed the personification of a powerful spirited animal, nette. Thanks for my placement in your contest on the first day of the new year.
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Date: 1/1/2014 10:27:00 PM
Tigress! You surely have a tigress spirit my friend, with complete awe I read this amazing write! You bring true personification to a tigress's spirit, quite refreshing and ingenious! One of your best poems Nette! Great Work!!
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Date: 1/1/2014 6:58:00 PM
Happy new year, Nette !!! ..once again.,you proved how clever and awesome Tigress poet you are :)) ..more love and blessings for you.. ^__^ AiyaH
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Date: 1/1/2014 5:17:00 PM
To give a tigress human attributes along with symbolisms is a daring task. And your brilliance caught the essence of this fantastic concept. Sensual, tender, bold. I am smashed!
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