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bafflingly bemusing mind & mood unwary & brazen bookie secluded sequestered stouthearted spluttered calming melody in woeful wail & stormy temper quirky upsurge of humdinger & humdrum ancient mysteries slumber in depths of stillness & eternal light blazing bright beaming insight beaconing delight trance in abyss but waters curl in mercurial cadence & unfathomable ocean a wave streaming serenity splendid sparking sprouting spring seedling of starlit serenade surrounding hollow in wails of hazy aches forlorn sighs scattered a wave a verve a swerve. Written: January 22, 2023 Your Selection Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 1/22/2023 11:13:00 AM
Your beginning tongue twister causes us to slow down from the get go. I love the alliteration. Very well done, Lasaad! I bet this will be a winner! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 1/22/2023 11:12:00 AM
Calming melody in woeful wail, what a wonderful paradox Lasaad, and indeed this whole form seems to be designed with this in mind, an intriguing write, I wish you all the best in contest, cheers David
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Date: 1/22/2023 9:32:00 AM
Awesome write. I really like this. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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