Mystery of Mellowness

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bafflingly 
    bemusing
         mind
       &
         mood
              unwary
       &
          brazen bookie
       secluded  
     sequestered
  stouthearted
spluttered

calming 
    melody
  in
woeful 
     wail
&
stormy 
  temper
     quirky 
         upsurge
of
     humdinger
   &
 humdrum

ancient 
      mysteries
          slumber 
   in 
          depths
   of
 stillness
     &
eternal light
      blazing bright 
          beaming insight
               beaconing  delight

trance 
    in
      abyss
        but
waters curl
    in 
  mercurial 
      cadence
    &
  unfathomable 
         ocean
a wave
          streaming serenity
      splendid sparking
    sprouting spring
seedling
  of
    starlit serenade
surrounding hollow
 in
  wails
      of
     hazy aches
   forlorn sighs
scattered
   a wave
      a verve
          a swerve.

Written: January 22, 2023

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NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/22/2023 11:13:00 AM

Your beginning tongue twister causes us to slow down from the get go. I love the alliteration. Very well done, Lasaad! I bet this will be a winner! Hugs ~ Kim

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/22/2023 11:12:00 AM

Calming melody in woeful wail, what a wonderful paradox Lasaad, and indeed this whole form seems to be designed with this in mind, an intriguing write, I wish you all the best in contest, cheers David

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/22/2023 9:32:00 AM

Awesome write. I really like this. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina