Mystery Moon

Mystery Moon
keeper of secrets peeps behind a veil of clouds… enigmatic moon
10-26-2014 Contest: Theme #5 - The Moon Sponsor: SKAT A Placement: 9th
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Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Darling gem of a poem, Pandita.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Thank you, thank you, Line. You are ever kind to compliment my efforts! I am glad you enjoyed it! Pandita
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February 7, 2016 at 11:49 AM
Hi Pandita, thank you for the reply
A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:43 PM
PANDITA, Congrats on your Moonish win. Luv LINDA -
Sietesantos Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Hi Linda, thank you so very much for kindy complimenting this piece. All the best to you, my friend. Pandita
A. Sharma Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:24 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Pandita!
Sietesantos Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Hi Dr. Sharma, thank you, thank you. I am glad you enjoyed this one and I am happy to hear from you! Warmest regards. Pandita
A  Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Pandita, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT**
Sietesantos Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Many thanks, Skat, for including this piece on your list of winners! I really appreciate it! Warmest regards. Pandita
Jordan Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 6:32 PM
I take it that you love the night, when the moon is full, and the stars are bright. I imagine you standing there, caressed by heaven. Great poem Pandita. Stay strong Ken -
Sietesantos Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 9:38 PM
I do love the night and it gives me so much pleasure to view the beautiful heavens manifesting the awesome glory of God! Take care, my friend. Pandita
A  Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 12:02 AM
ooo. I like it. Enigmatic Moon. Beautiful **SKAT LOVE**
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February 22, 2015 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, thank you, SKAT A. You are so kind to compliment my efforts! I am glad you enjoyed this one! Pandita
Christian-Bowling Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 10:37 AM
The moon is one of God's Greatest creations nice poem....and thank you for reading my poetry:)Love Ettie
Sietesantos Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 11:32 AM
Hi Ettie, thank you, thank you. I am glad you enjoyed this one and I am happy to hear from you! Warmest regards. Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 11:32 PM
a very nice one for the enigmatic moon. Can't believe I never saw this one of yours yet!
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November 7, 2014 at 2:18 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you so very much for kindy complimenting this piece. Glda that you like it! have a wonderful weekend! Pandita
Ancestor Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 8:03 PM
November 6, 2014...Its A Full New Mexican Moon.. here..Your poem gave it fullest flavor! Illuminating & Stunning!
Sietesantos Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 2:21 PM
Yes, the Moon has been so enchantingly lovely these past few days. I saw it at 5:00 am in all its awesome glory and I was completely mesmerized. Thanks for stopping by, Marie, and all the best. Pandita
Nkanu Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 4:02 PM
Succinct, but an entailment. Beautiful......
Sietesantos Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 6:30 PM
Many thanks, Okio for your visit and I truly appreciate your lovely compliments. Warmest regards. Pandita
Tidd Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 12:51 PM
This is nice.
Sietesantos Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 6:20 AM
OMG - it is just incredible work of art! Thanks for referring me to it!
Tidd Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 2:39 PM
The moon on the Moraga Steps https://www.google.com/search?q=moraga+steps+moon&client=firefox-a&hs=WP7&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&channel=nts&tbm=isch&imgil=7v5Uf_KKGkFTSM%253A%253BgC6g5dbvy8c84M%253Bhttp%25253A%25252F%25252Fwww.pinterest.com%25252Fpin%25252F309622543104943568%25252F&source=iu&pf=m&fir=7v5Uf_KKGkFTSM%253A%252CgC6g5dbvy8c84M%252C_&usg=__lBiz4rnlz1Nwbs2G0cGX_5I8oNc%3D&biw=1536&bih=731&ved=0CC0Qyjc&ei=kTlZVKrMCMqiNvPPgfgH#facrc=_&imgdii=_&imgrc=7v5Uf_KKGkFTSM%253A%3BgC6g5dbvy8c84M%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fmedia-cache-ak0.pinimg.com%252F736x%252Fe8%252F23%252Ffa%252Fe823fa4d9c716ed46cb1b478aa8759cc.jpg%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.pinterest.com%252Fpin%252F309622543104943568%252F%3B480%3B640
Sietesantos Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 2:00 PM
Many thanks, Jim! I always love to hear from you and I am happy you like this one! Pandita
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:02 PM
A lovely haiku. The moon inspires me too. I love your imagery in this poem!
Sietesantos Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Hi Connie, we are definitely moon lovers:-)! Thank you very much for selecting my poem to read and thank you for your kind compliments and continued support. Warmest regards. Pandita
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November 2, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Awesome Haiku..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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November 2, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Thank you so very much dear Sara for your always encouraging compliments and comments! Have a wonderful week! Pandita
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November 2, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Keeper of secrets uhh No secret is safe with him . I know. Read my poems. Excellent haiku. Loved it. xxxxx rajat
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November 2, 2014 at 4:07 PM
Thank you, thank you, Rajit. I am glad you enjoyed this one! I always appreciate hearing from you:-)! Warmest regards. Pandita
Nair Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 1:21 AM
Pandita, your take on the moon, the perennial subject of poets from time immemorial, is quite interesting.
Sietesantos Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Hi my friend, many many thanks for your thoughtful comments which continue to encourage me! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. All the very best to you! Pandita
Mcdaid Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 3:03 PM
stunning beautiful picture pandita
Sietesantos Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 3:37 PM
Liam, thank you so very much for supporting me and for your wonderfully encouraging compliments. Pandita
Yvonne Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 9:59 AM
When I was a child I use to skateboard on the crest of the moon. Great Haiku.
Sietesantos Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 12:50 PM
Hi Maurice, even you comments are very poetic - skating "on the crest of the moon!" I love it! Thank you my friend for your continued encouragement and support! Warmest regards. Pandita
A. Sharma Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 8:35 AM
It's so true Pandita! I too find it peeping left n right from behind the clouds,, love pic painted in just few words, amazing!
Sietesantos Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, thank you so very much for your always complimentary responses. Thanks for the support, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita
De La Luna Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 4:48 AM
as a child, i would always imagine the moon looking down at me and seeing my every move. so, i became a moon lover. i love this beautiful haiku, Pandita!
Sietesantos Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Hi Hija, knowing your deep connection with the Moon, I knew you would enjoy this one. Thank you for your lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 9:45 PM
You get a 7 from me, this is beautiful Pandita. :) love and hugs dear friend eve
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October 26, 2014 at 9:58 PM
Dear Eve, I am grateful for the high rating which means a lot to me. Thank you so very much, my friend for the mutual encouragement and support! Warmest regards always. Pandita
Meade Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 8:06 PM
I have always wonder of all the "secrets" the moon has seen . . . it's gravitational force that pull our oceans, it's waning and waxing that sets the mood . . . as it hangs above keeping watch. Enigmatic -- great word choice -- creating a sense of motion of the moon. Very nice. Keep going
Sietesantos Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 10:01 PM
Hi David, many many thanks for your thoughtful comments and wonderful compliments which continue to encourage me! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. All the very best to you! Pandita
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 7:27 PM
simply stunning Pandita:-) Hugs jan xxx
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October 26, 2014 at 7:34 PM
Jan, thank you so very much for your always complimentary responses. Thanks for the support, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita
Ayala Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 7:15 PM
Exquisite piece - lovely write! Very enjoyable read, Pandita! I am a Moon lover and this piece so beautifully highlights the mystique of our wonderful Moon. Kika
Sietesantos Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 7:35 PM
Kika, thank you for supporting me and for your encouraging compliments. Pandita
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