Mystery

If there is any truth in what is said by some, I should never have these feelings for 

you in such a short time.

"Why do I feel so mystified by the sight of you?" 

I ask myself so many times in a day.

Don't know how to act or respond in the moment of enchantment.

In a whirlwind of confusion, words are hard to describe the magic stirring in me.  

Don't want to be too pushy, too afraid to loose the beauty so enchanting.  

Maybe out of fear, I want to flee the madness.

Should I take the chance to find out if this is love or a friend possibly blinding us as 

one?

Only time will uncover the mystery.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 16, 2026 at 6:16 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 6:13 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 10:52 PM
AL, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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