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Mystery

Looking out across the sea,a beautiful sunset looking back at me. Watching the waves as they come in,not being able to see them again. A mystery I've found within this write, for you can't see the same wave twice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/2/2009 7:54:00 PM
Wonderful image, Marie, and a wise observation: no two waves are alike, just as no two snowflakes. Best to you, Carolyn
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Date: 2/22/2009 8:03:00 AM
A very telling poem Marie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/20/2009 10:04:00 PM
Nice imagery Marie, the context of the poem is great...Raul
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Date: 2/20/2009 8:17:00 PM
A lovely flow to this poem, I like the last verse and if and when I see a wave again I bet I will remember it, Blessings, Ron
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Date: 2/20/2009 7:40:00 PM
I love it! You must live bt the ocean too!? Hello my dear and gifted friend and poetess Marie Prance!!! What a truly lovely and picturesque moment you painted here dear lady~Smile~much prettier than black bottles huh!! Smile~I hope that you are doing wonderfully tonight~and that waves are shimmering sweetly for you underbeath the stars!! "Lovely Write Marie~ Warmth & Blessings Always To You & Your Loves, John!:)
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Date: 2/20/2009 6:51:00 AM
Forever changing, life stands still for no one or anything.....love this, always, Christy
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