Mysterious Twinkling

I often sit and wonder 
At what stars are made
Could they be made of science
Could they be God given?

Looking at them shining
I set out to imagine
What if I was a love fairy
Twinkling on Earth

Lonely and lost 
I cannot hide my smile
Someday I shall be a star
Twinkling, twinkling in the dark sky!

Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Contest : Shine with your Naani
Spnsored by Nette Onclaud
Date : 25 June 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 4, 2014 at 10:10 AM
Anoucheka, Congratulations, in Nette's " SHINE WITH YOUR NAANI!!" Contest :) LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 10:48 PM
this reminds me of a love story I saw last year when the two lovers were turned into stars in the sky. I can't even remember its name. but anyway ,Congrats on your win. cute poem.
Onclaud Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 4:11 PM
you are a star anoucheka.. this is so captvating... thanks for gracing my contest and sweet congrats on your fine win.. huggs
Sietesantos Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 1:41 PM
Hi Anoucheka - Bravo on your fine win - well deserved, my friend! This is such a lovely write!
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July 1, 2014 at 1:01 PM
Lovely write and win, Anoucheka, Mohan
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 10:39 AM
Nice take on the theme of the poem, Anoucheka. congrats on the win
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