Poesy Relish Poet Couplet

Mysterious Love

Love is a mystery
with excellent archery
shoots at a stance
making the heart dance

when souls meet
creating memory sweet 
days transpire at a pace
as if time is at race

when cupid strikes
who dare cross?
for it pricks 
with a sharp dose.

© Nadiya (14 Jan '15)

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Julia Ward March 12, 2015 at 8:59 AM I like your well constructed poem. Julia, xx Poesy Relish March 12, 2015 at 11:11 AM Thank you Julia:).. glad you liked it

Ovidiu Bocsa January 31, 2015 at 6:03 AM You are a specialist in love poetry.Always impressed by Mysterious love>"when souls meet creating memory sweet" Congrat. Poesy Relish January 31, 2015 at 6:27 AM Thank you very much... i am only a beginner in writing poems...appreciate your visit and comment...regards,nad!

Euni- verse January 29, 2015 at 5:03 AM I loved the words used... Simple yet full of meaning :D Poesy Relish January 29, 2015 at 5:28 AM Thank you Eunice.. appreciate your visit and comment... nad!

Indra B Chhetri January 19, 2015 at 8:39 AM Beautiful and so very precisely described Love..........keep it up. Poesy Relish January 19, 2015 at 9:25 AM Thank you for the encouraging words....

Liam Mcdaid January 16, 2015 at 10:47 AM it sure is a mystery love beautifully painted nadyia Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 12:42 AM Thank you Liam :)...

Wilma Neels January 15, 2015 at 11:20 AM Nadiya, really enjoyed your take on love tonight.. thank you for dropping by on my side ;) Poesy Relish January 15, 2015 at 2:57 PM Thanks to you as well wilma... Good night