mysterious fog

     as mysterious
     as fog on autumn meadows
     you enter my life
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Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 7:48 PM
Wow. Love this. Congratulations
Achara Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 8:06 PM
Thank you. I quite like it myself.
Andresen Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 1:16 AM
- Perfect last line :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Chetta :) - hugs
Achara Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 8:05 PM
Thank you.
Greenhough Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 7:50 AM
This is a lovely senryu.
Achara Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 8:42 AM
Thank you.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 4:26 PM
your imagery captured my attention in your senyru. Nicely done for the contest, hugs, Sara
Achara Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 5:51 PM
Thank you.
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