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mysterious fog

     as mysterious
     as fog on autumn meadows
     you enter my life

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2025 7:48:00 PM

Wow. Love this. Congratulations

Chetta Achara
Date: 9/6/2025 8:06:00 PM

Thank you. I quite like it myself.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2025 1:16:00 AM

- Perfect last line :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Chetta :) - hugs

Chetta Achara
Date: 9/6/2025 8:05:00 PM

Thank you.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/4/2025 7:50:00 AM

This is a lovely senryu.

Chetta Achara
Date: 9/4/2025 8:42:00 AM

Thank you.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/2/2025 4:26:00 PM

your imagery captured my attention in your senyru. Nicely done for the contest, hugs, Sara

Chetta Achara
Date: 9/2/2025 5:51:00 PM

Thank you.

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 9/2/2025 9:10:00 AM

The sweetness of not knowing! Brilliant work

Chetta Achara
Date: 9/2/2025 9:43:00 AM

Thank you.