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Mysterious and Magnetic

- - The way we were
           in poetic form, underlined and understood,
                        unlaced and then,
                                exposed –

  Like chapters taken from the vertebral column
              reality now realizes the connection

   
 I am curious     
      how the glossary of you can still remain:
                               untouched,
                              unexplained 
                           
                . .  The illustration being plain . .  
                               
                             Who knows
                           your definition
                                 when,
               Incomprehensible is the selection

                               _______
                              Pull me in
                                  again,
                        to the way we were
                               
             The electricity between you and me, 
                             is Magnetic
                    an uncontrollable sensation,
                           
                           Quite Mysterious
                               ________


You wonder: 
              While I am bare and unaware
       
       Will tracing space, aligning lace back in its place,
                  . . the vocabulary of me . .
                           
                             Somehow
                                bind,
                          your section
                              to mine
                          
                    To the way we were, 
                       in poetic form


    Together - -
            We are underlined and understood,
                        unlaced and
                                exposed –
           
            Reality now realizes the connection




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~ Just a little scribble ~

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Running Wolves January 2, 2020 at 3:23 PM With each line we write, we expose ourselves a little at a time. It is rare to find one who can read those lines and truly understand us. Lovely write Brandy Nicole January 2, 2020 at 4:08 PM Your thoughts hold so much truth. Within our words, the heart is truly open. This is a favorite of mine. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy

John Watt December 28, 2019 at 2:58 AM Lovely and sensuous, Brandy. I like the references to literary creation - chapters, glossary, illustration, definition. I love the line, "tracing space, aligning lace back in its place" for its cadence and internal rhymes. Also, how "We are underlined and understood / unlaced and exposed" brings the end back to the beginning in a full circle. It's a fav, well done, Brandy. Brandy Nicole December 28, 2019 at 6:33 PM Yes, this is playful, passionate, sensual- plus soooo much more. Thank you John, for all your kind words and compliments. I enjoyed creating this. So sweet of you to place it in your favorites. It is a favorite of mine too. I appreciate you. :) Brandy

Elaine Perrin October 22, 2019 at 11:52 AM Mysteriously beautiful, I love it! :-) x Brandy Nicole October 22, 2019 at 1:19 PM Thank you Elaine! Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux October 16, 2019 at 9:06 AM You are very welcome Brandy. Brandy Nicole October 16, 2019 at 9:46 PM :) Soft smile.

Richard Lamoureux July 22, 2019 at 7:30 AM It seems Iam drawn to this one once again. Glad to reread it. Hugs Rick. Brandy Nicole July 22, 2019 at 7:03 PM These words still hold me too. Not sure why. The emotions truly tangle around me and my heart. Thank you Rick. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill April 24, 2019 at 10:08 AM Bravo and well done. Some connections cut through time and space and all things between...TAH Brandy Nicole April 24, 2019 at 11:17 AM Thank you Tobey!! Such a wonderful thing to say, and it is so true. I appreciate your kind words. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos April 22, 2019 at 10:37 AM A very sensual write - quite intoxicating actually Brandy - loved it. Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Brandy Nicole April 22, 2019 at 4:02 PM Thank you Jennifer. The possibilities are endless, when words curl around my pen. :) I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux April 16, 2019 at 8:32 AM I so enjoyed giving this one another read. A delicious piece of writing. Brandy Nicole April 16, 2019 at 10:44 AM Thank you Richard. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. I certainly enjoyed writing this. I am happy that you enjoy reading it. ~ Brandy

Robert Lindley April 15, 2019 at 8:03 AM I am in awe of the depths and creativity of this piece. A fav.. Brandy Nicole April 15, 2019 at 4:11 PM Your thoughts bring a smile and leave me in awe, my dear friend. :) Thank you for your kind words, and for placing this in your favorites. ~ Brandy

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. April 15, 2019 at 6:47 AM ' Who knows your definition when, Incomprehensible is the selection' very profound line as well as the entire poem Brandy Nicole April 15, 2019 at 4:08 PM Thank you Allen. Wishing to unravel the mystery of it all, yet- everything still seems hidden. Or so it seems. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux April 9, 2019 at 4:30 PM You wrote this so beautifully. Brandy Nicole April 9, 2019 at 10:43 PM Thank you Richard!!! Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos April 9, 2019 at 1:54 PM This poem is so different, has such depth, sensual yet wholesome! Your poetry is magnetic Brandy. Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Brandy Nicole April 9, 2019 at 10:42 PM Thank you Jennifer. You are right, there are many moments in this. Many emotions. Such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. :) I appreciate you and your thoughts. Hugs, Brandy

Winged Warrior April 9, 2019 at 9:27 AM WoW!...what a sensual scribble...I'll have what you're having lol...hey kiddo, what up?... happy scribbling...^WW^...{*J*} Brandy Nicole April 9, 2019 at 10:40 PM To get a WoW from you, then it must mean you like it!! :) Thank you Warrior with Wings!! I am doing great, even around these busy moments. Blessings are everywhere. Keep smiling my friend. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2019 at 8:30 PM very interesting how you changed the font. I took it as two lovers talking back and forth. Very nice, Brandy. Brandy Nicole April 4, 2019 at 9:14 PM Thank you Andrea! In a sense, changing the font separates these thoughts in-between. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Silent One March 30, 2019 at 1:01 PM This is more than just a scribble... I found it sensual and mysterious... Brandy Nicole March 30, 2019 at 1:44 PM Thank you Silent One!!! Most of my poetry holds love- perhaps a sensual moment. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Vladislav Raven March 30, 2019 at 10:25 AM Hi Brandy, this is a most wonderful scribble to peruse this afternoon. This write goes far beyond scribble in its scope. Excellent work. I do love the content and the creativity within this write. The mystery of poetic love taken to a new level. A fave. have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX Brandy Nicole March 30, 2019 at 1:40 PM Thank you Vladislav Raven! Your kind words are appreciated. Such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. These scribbles of mine, are moments from the heart. Many blessings to you. :) Brandy

Caren Krutsinger March 28, 2019 at 2:18 AM It intrigues me that you have somehow personified poetry and a love interest in such a wonderful new way. Gorgeous, Brandy! Brandy Nicole March 28, 2019 at 6:33 PM Thank you Caren! Words seem to have taken a different path for me, but the moments and emotions are still the same. Your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you for being here, for being you. :) Brandy

Martin Brown March 26, 2019 at 5:30 AM This poem bursts with pathos. With poignant imagery and effective use of poetic devices, Mysterious and Magnetic impacts a reader to a great degree. Brandy Nicole March 26, 2019 at 11:20 AM Images create the mood, the moment. There is Mystery and a Magnetic pull within these words. Thank you Martin. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

Lawrence Sharp March 25, 2019 at 11:21 PM I am quite mesmerized by this; fave. Brandy Nicole March 26, 2019 at 11:07 AM Thank you Lawrence!!! Being mesmerized is a good thing. :) "Contemplating Calculations" expresses moments in a Mathematical way. This, like two pages that are side by side. A connection of Words. Touching!! I appreciate you placing this in your favorites. :) Brandy

John Gondolf March 25, 2019 at 8:44 PM A beautifully mysterious scribble my dear friend, magnetic in many ways. Your mysterious magnetism is captivating. All my best. John Brandy Nicole March 25, 2019 at 9:23 PM Thank you John!! Such a wonderful thing to say about me and my poetry. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy

Arturo Michael March 25, 2019 at 1:48 PM Mysterious connection....A poem woven in the tapestry of love....Nice write...Sweet heart...All the best Brandy Brandy Nicole March 25, 2019 at 8:05 PM Thank you Arturo!! Love lingers within most, if not all of my poems. I enjoyed creating this Mysterious connection as words can become Magnetic. Awe, thank you. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit March 25, 2019 at 7:29 AM Superbly done--I like the way your opening and closing stanzas form the bookends to your poem. Very romantic in a subtle tone of mysterious connection that attracts and mesmerizes. Enjoyed the read, as always, Brandy. Brandy Nicole March 25, 2019 at 7:52 PM You always know the right thing to say!!! Creating an opening and ending in the same way- brings it all together. Sometimes, my words flow like this. Thank you Vijay. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Joseph May March 25, 2019 at 7:03 AM A poetic connection realigned and understood...Very nicely penned Brandy Brandy Nicole March 25, 2019 at 7:48 PM Thank you Joseph. The beauty of such a connection. The wonder of it all. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy