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- - The way we were in poetic form, underlined and understood, unlaced and then, exposed – Like chapters taken from the vertebral column reality now realizes the connection I am curious how the glossary of you can still remain: untouched, unexplained . . The illustration being plain . . Who knows your definition when, Incomprehensible is the selection _______ Pull me in again, to the way we were The electricity between you and me, is Magnetic an uncontrollable sensation, Quite Mysterious ________ You wonder: While I am bare and unaware Will tracing space, aligning lace back in its place, . . the vocabulary of me . . Somehow bind, your section to mine To the way we were, in poetic form Together - - We are underlined and understood, unlaced and exposed – Reality now realizes the connection _________________ ~ Just a little scribble ~

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Running Wolves

Date: 1/2/2020 3:23:00 PM

With each line we write, we expose ourselves a little at a time. It is rare to find one who can read those lines and truly understand us. Lovely write

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/2/2020 4:08:00 PM

Your thoughts hold so much truth. Within our words, the heart is truly open. This is a favorite of mine. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy

John Watt

Date: 12/28/2019 2:58:00 AM

Lovely and sensuous, Brandy. I like the references to literary creation - chapters, glossary, illustration, definition. I love the line, "tracing space, aligning lace back in its place" for its cadence and internal rhymes. Also, how "We are underlined and understood / unlaced and exposed" brings the end back to the beginning in a full circle. It's a fav, well done, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/28/2019 6:33:00 PM

Yes, this is playful, passionate, sensual- plus soooo much more. Thank you John, for all your kind words and compliments. I enjoyed creating this. So sweet of you to place it in your favorites. It is a favorite of mine too. I appreciate you. :) Brandy

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/22/2019 11:52:00 AM

Mysteriously beautiful, I love it! :-) x

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/22/2019 1:19:00 PM

Thank you Elaine! Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/16/2019 9:06:00 AM

You are very welcome Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/16/2019 9:46:00 PM

:) Soft smile.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/22/2019 7:30:00 AM

It seems Iam drawn to this one once again. Glad to reread it. Hugs Rick.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/22/2019 7:03:00 PM

These words still hold me too. Not sure why. The emotions truly tangle around me and my heart. Thank you Rick. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Lyric Man

Date: 4/26/2019 5:04:00 PM

This scribble inspires.. nice to read your brilliantly poetic works my friend!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/26/2019 7:24:00 PM

Thank you Lyric Man. My heart smiles reading reading your thoughts. Always appreciated. :) Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 4/24/2019 10:08:00 AM

Bravo and well done. Some connections cut through time and space and all things between...TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/24/2019 11:17:00 AM

Thank you Tobey!! Such a wonderful thing to say, and it is so true. I appreciate your kind words. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/22/2019 10:37:00 AM

A very sensual write - quite intoxicating actually Brandy - loved it. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/22/2019 4:02:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer. The possibilities are endless, when words curl around my pen. :) I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/16/2019 8:32:00 AM

I so enjoyed giving this one another read. A delicious piece of writing.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/16/2019 10:44:00 AM

Thank you Richard. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. I certainly enjoyed writing this. I am happy that you enjoy reading it. ~ Brandy

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/15/2019 8:03:00 AM

I am in awe of the depths and creativity of this piece. A fav..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/15/2019 4:11:00 PM

Your thoughts bring a smile and leave me in awe, my dear friend. :) Thank you for your kind words, and for placing this in your favorites. ~ Brandy

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/15/2019 6:47:00 AM

' Who knows your definition when, Incomprehensible is the selection' very profound line as well as the entire poem

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/15/2019 4:08:00 PM

Thank you Allen. Wishing to unravel the mystery of it all, yet- everything still seems hidden. Or so it seems. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/9/2019 4:30:00 PM

You wrote this so beautifully.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/9/2019 10:43:00 PM

Thank you Richard!!! Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/9/2019 1:54:00 PM

This poem is so different, has such depth, sensual yet wholesome! Your poetry is magnetic Brandy. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/9/2019 10:42:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer. You are right, there are many moments in this. Many emotions. Such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. :) I appreciate you and your thoughts. Hugs, Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/9/2019 9:27:00 AM

WoW!...what a sensual scribble...I'll have what you're having lol...hey kiddo, what up?... happy scribbling...^WW^...{*J*}

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/9/2019 10:40:00 PM

To get a WoW from you, then it must mean you like it!! :) Thank you Warrior with Wings!! I am doing great, even around these busy moments. Blessings are everywhere. Keep smiling my friend. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2019 8:30:00 PM

very interesting how you changed the font. I took it as two lovers talking back and forth. Very nice, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/4/2019 9:14:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! In a sense, changing the font separates these thoughts in-between. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Silent One

Date: 3/30/2019 1:01:00 PM

This is more than just a scribble... I found it sensual and mysterious...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/30/2019 1:44:00 PM

Thank you Silent One!!! Most of my poetry holds love- perhaps a sensual moment. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/30/2019 10:25:00 AM

Hi Brandy, this is a most wonderful scribble to peruse this afternoon. This write goes far beyond scribble in its scope. Excellent work. I do love the content and the creativity within this write. The mystery of poetic love taken to a new level. A fave. have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/30/2019 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Vladislav Raven! Your kind words are appreciated. Such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. These scribbles of mine, are moments from the heart. Many blessings to you. :) Brandy

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/28/2019 2:18:00 AM

It intrigues me that you have somehow personified poetry and a love interest in such a wonderful new way. Gorgeous, Brandy!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/28/2019 6:33:00 PM

Thank you Caren! Words seem to have taken a different path for me, but the moments and emotions are still the same. Your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you for being here, for being you. :) Brandy

Martin Brown

Date: 3/26/2019 5:30:00 AM

This poem bursts with pathos. With poignant imagery and effective use of poetic devices, Mysterious and Magnetic impacts a reader to a great degree.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/26/2019 11:20:00 AM

Images create the mood, the moment. There is Mystery and a Magnetic pull within these words. Thank you Martin. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 3/25/2019 11:21:00 PM

I am quite mesmerized by this; fave.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/26/2019 11:07:00 AM

Thank you Lawrence!!! Being mesmerized is a good thing. :) "Contemplating Calculations" expresses moments in a Mathematical way. This, like two pages that are side by side. A connection of Words. Touching!! I appreciate you placing this in your favorites. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 3/25/2019 8:44:00 PM

A beautifully mysterious scribble my dear friend, magnetic in many ways. Your mysterious magnetism is captivating. All my best. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/25/2019 9:23:00 PM

Thank you John!! Such a wonderful thing to say about me and my poetry. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/25/2019 1:48:00 PM

Mysterious connection....A poem woven in the tapestry of love....Nice write...Sweet heart...All the best Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/25/2019 8:05:00 PM

Thank you Arturo!! Love lingers within most, if not all of my poems. I enjoyed creating this Mysterious connection as words can become Magnetic. Awe, thank you. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/25/2019 7:29:00 AM

Superbly done--I like the way your opening and closing stanzas form the bookends to your poem. Very romantic in a subtle tone of mysterious connection that attracts and mesmerizes. Enjoyed the read, as always, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/25/2019 7:52:00 PM

You always know the right thing to say!!! Creating an opening and ending in the same way- brings it all together. Sometimes, my words flow like this. Thank you Vijay. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 3/25/2019 7:03:00 AM

A poetic connection realigned and understood...Very nicely penned Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/25/2019 7:48:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. The beauty of such a connection. The wonder of it all. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy