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  - - The way we were
           in poetic form, underlined and understood,
                        unlaced and then,
                                exposed –

  Like chapters taken from the vertebral column
              reality now realizes the connection

   
 I am curious     
      how the glossary of you can still remain:
                               untouched,
                              unexplained 
                           
                . .  The illustration being plain . .  
                               
                             Who knows
                           your definition
                                 when,
               Incomprehensible is the selection

                               _______
                              Pull me in
                                  again,
                        to the way we were
                               
             The electricity between you and me, 
                             is Magnetic
                    an uncontrollable sensation,
                           
                           Quite Mysterious
                               ________


You wonder: 
              While I am bare and unaware
       
       Will tracing space, aligning lace back in its place,
                  . . the vocabulary of me . .
                           
                             Somehow
                                bind,
                          your section
                              to mine
                          
                    To the way we were, 
                       in poetic form


    Together - -
            We are underlined and understood,
                        unlaced and
                                exposed –
           
            Reality now realizes the connection




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~ Just a little scribble ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/22/2019 11:52:00 AM
Mysteriously beautiful, I love it! :-) x
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Date: 10/22/2019 1:19:00 PM
Thank you Elaine! Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 10/16/2019 9:06:00 AM
You are very welcome Brandy.
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Date: 10/16/2019 9:46:00 PM
:) Soft smile.
Date: 7/22/2019 7:30:00 AM
It seems Iam drawn to this one once again. Glad to reread it. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/22/2019 7:03:00 PM
These words still hold me too. Not sure why. The emotions truly tangle around me and my heart. Thank you Rick. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 4/26/2019 5:04:00 PM
This scribble inspires.. nice to read your brilliantly poetic works my friend!
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Date: 4/26/2019 7:24:00 PM
Thank you Lyric Man. My heart smiles reading reading your thoughts. Always appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 4/24/2019 10:08:00 AM
Bravo and well done. Some connections cut through time and space and all things between...TAH
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Date: 4/24/2019 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Tobey!! Such a wonderful thing to say, and it is so true. I appreciate your kind words. :) Brandy
Date: 4/22/2019 10:37:00 AM
A very sensual write - quite intoxicating actually Brandy - loved it. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/22/2019 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer. The possibilities are endless, when words curl around my pen. :) I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 4/16/2019 8:32:00 AM
I so enjoyed giving this one another read. A delicious piece of writing.
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Date: 4/16/2019 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Richard. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. I certainly enjoyed writing this. I am happy that you enjoy reading it. ~ Brandy
Date: 4/15/2019 8:03:00 AM
I am in awe of the depths and creativity of this piece. A fav..
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Date: 4/15/2019 4:11:00 PM
Your thoughts bring a smile and leave me in awe, my dear friend. :) Thank you for your kind words, and for placing this in your favorites. ~ Brandy
Date: 4/15/2019 6:47:00 AM
' Who knows your definition when, Incomprehensible is the selection' very profound line as well as the entire poem
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Date: 4/15/2019 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Allen. Wishing to unravel the mystery of it all, yet- everything still seems hidden. Or so it seems. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 4/9/2019 4:30:00 PM
You wrote this so beautifully.
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Date: 4/9/2019 10:43:00 PM
Thank you Richard!!! Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 4/9/2019 1:54:00 PM
This poem is so different, has such depth, sensual yet wholesome! Your poetry is magnetic Brandy. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/9/2019 10:42:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer. You are right, there are many moments in this. Many emotions. Such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. :) I appreciate you and your thoughts. Hugs, Brandy
Date: 4/9/2019 9:27:00 AM
WoW!...what a sensual scribble...I'll have what you're having lol...hey kiddo, what up?... happy scribbling...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 4/9/2019 10:40:00 PM
To get a WoW from you, then it must mean you like it!! :) Thank you Warrior with Wings!! I am doing great, even around these busy moments. Blessings are everywhere. Keep smiling my friend. ~ Brandy
Date: 4/4/2019 8:30:00 PM
very interesting how you changed the font. I took it as two lovers talking back and forth. Very nice, Brandy.
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Date: 4/4/2019 9:14:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! In a sense, changing the font separates these thoughts in-between. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/30/2019 1:01:00 PM
This is more than just a scribble... I found it sensual and mysterious...
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Date: 3/30/2019 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Silent One!!! Most of my poetry holds love- perhaps a sensual moment. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 3/30/2019 10:25:00 AM
Hi Brandy, this is a most wonderful scribble to peruse this afternoon. This write goes far beyond scribble in its scope. Excellent work. I do love the content and the creativity within this write. The mystery of poetic love taken to a new level. A fave. have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 3/30/2019 1:40:00 PM
Thank you Vladislav Raven! Your kind words are appreciated. Such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. These scribbles of mine, are moments from the heart. Many blessings to you. :) Brandy
Date: 3/28/2019 2:18:00 AM
It intrigues me that you have somehow personified poetry and a love interest in such a wonderful new way. Gorgeous, Brandy!
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Date: 3/28/2019 6:33:00 PM
Thank you Caren! Words seem to have taken a different path for me, but the moments and emotions are still the same. Your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you for being here, for being you. :) Brandy
Date: 3/26/2019 5:30:00 AM
This poem bursts with pathos. With poignant imagery and effective use of poetic devices, Mysterious and Magnetic impacts a reader to a great degree.
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Date: 3/26/2019 11:20:00 AM
Images create the mood, the moment. There is Mystery and a Magnetic pull within these words. Thank you Martin. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 3/25/2019 11:21:00 PM
I am quite mesmerized by this; fave.
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Date: 3/26/2019 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Lawrence!!! Being mesmerized is a good thing. :) "Contemplating Calculations" expresses moments in a Mathematical way. This, like two pages that are side by side. A connection of Words. Touching!! I appreciate you placing this in your favorites. :) Brandy
Date: 3/25/2019 8:44:00 PM
A beautifully mysterious scribble my dear friend, magnetic in many ways. Your mysterious magnetism is captivating. All my best. John
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Date: 3/25/2019 9:23:00 PM
Thank you John!! Such a wonderful thing to say about me and my poetry. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 3/25/2019 1:48:00 PM
Mysterious connection....A poem woven in the tapestry of love....Nice write...Sweet heart...All the best Brandy
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Date: 3/25/2019 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Arturo!! Love lingers within most, if not all of my poems. I enjoyed creating this Mysterious connection as words can become Magnetic. Awe, thank you. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/25/2019 9:25:00 AM
Nothing like a man of mystery eh? It's always more fun when there are unknowns and unknowables. Cool write
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Date: 3/25/2019 7:54:00 PM
True!! Sometimes, Mystery is a good thing. The possibilities are endless indeed. Thank you Son of Spock. :) Brandy
Date: 3/25/2019 7:29:00 AM
Superbly done--I like the way your opening and closing stanzas form the bookends to your poem. Very romantic in a subtle tone of mysterious connection that attracts and mesmerizes. Enjoyed the read, as always, Brandy.
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Date: 3/25/2019 7:52:00 PM
You always know the right thing to say!!! Creating an opening and ending in the same way- brings it all together. Sometimes, my words flow like this. Thank you Vijay. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 3/25/2019 7:03:00 AM
A poetic connection realigned and understood...Very nicely penned Brandy
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Date: 3/25/2019 7:48:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. The beauty of such a connection. The wonder of it all. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 3/25/2019 12:18:00 AM
A poetic love symphony scribble in your usual impeccable way. Loved it.
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Date: 3/25/2019 7:43:00 PM
So kind of you to say Victor!! Your thoughts humble me. Thank you. You are appreciated. :) Brandy