Mysterious

Mysterious

My entire being tells me
You are my one and only
Soul mate, though your 
True self is hidden from me.
Every time I’m with you, I want to
Reach 
Into your soul and become
One with you but I
Usually encounter a wall that
Stops me from knowing you more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Thomas Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 10:16 AM
Though often unintentionally built, those walls can be almost impregnable. Enjoyed your acrostic Oliver :)
Mckeithan Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 7:20 PM
Thanks FJ
Goldsmith Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 12:19 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Mysterious" write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........
Mckeithan Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 12:59 PM
Thank you Paula
Wolf Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 8:23 PM
Very frustrating, methinks. ~ gw
Mckeithan Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 10:10 PM
Very much so
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