Myopic (An Acrostic)

Maybe

Your understanding

Ought to

Penetrate beyond

Icing and discover the

Cake

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For Sami's facial feature (Eyes) contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Spence Sr Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 10:42 AM
Lordie, lordie, lordie!!! Girl you have gone deep with this one. This ought to be a Pulitzer! You went way down in the primal sea to pull this one out. Awesome Job! ~Joseph
Tugaff Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 10:03 PM
Sue, this is brilliantly and intellegently penned. Good luck. Erninlado
Goff Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 5:54 PM
acrostic taken to another level!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 4:20 PM
Now that was clever. Nice comparison...understanding and cake. Good luck in the contest. Lovingly, Dane
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