My Worst Failure

Failure is what I am called
Since the time I can recall
Born on the 7th
Which is generally a jinx
I grew up being called a minx
My mother died when I was two
And people said with it I had something to do
I became an object to tease
It took my inner peace
Wherever I went I would cause hindrance
So I started believing in my unluckiness
I grew up to be a freak
And people would call it a family streak
I could never complete my studies
Like the rest of my street buddies
The street urchin became my love
But she thought of me as a pet dove
`Marry me’ I said one day to her
And she called me a failure
And here I am standing today
About to bid everyone good day
For today is the day of my execution
Maybe this would complete the calculation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 7:39 PM
Congratulations on your win, Tahera, but please never think of yourself as a jinx. You are a shining light here on Poetry Soup and you bring happiness to all of us through your kind words and friendship. God bless you; I hope there are brighter days ahead for you. Much love and admiration, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 6:17 AM
Congratulations on your win in PD'S contest Tahera. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 6:50 AM
oh wow, those last two lines were like ultimate clinchers for this emotive piece-- hope it's not based on real life though-- congrats on your win --nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 2:14 PM
Well deserved win, my friend. Congratulations to you! Luv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 1:40 PM
Congratulations on your win in this great contest..Sara
Mehta Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Tahera
Sweetheart Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Congrats Tahera my friend on your big win in P.D.'s contest for the worst poem ever.. bet u never thought that would happen as all your poetry is tremendous luv.. so enjoy your top spot and well deserved win and again Happy Thanksgiving to u ..
Mehta Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Tahera...u hv broken the jinx....placed 2nd not 7th in the contest.....congrats on big win.......... Luv/Best wishes.......Hitendra Mehta
A   Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Good morning Tahera, CONGRATULATIONS!! This poem was bad and okay,,but lots of bad thoughts, lol,, still can relate,,, Had lots of fun with this contest,, have a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
Neels Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 8:37 AM
Tahera an intensely thought provoking write.. Congratulations on your win in pd's contest ;)
Sweetheart Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 7:11 AM
Good Luck if for any of the current contests luv.. excellent write..
Sweetheart Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 7:11 AM
What an intense piece of poetry Tahera.. very expressive lines to convey your message of the torment of one who is different and unique... amazing.. thankxxx for enjoying my poetry reads today.. be blessed this happy weekend..luv..
Mehta Avatar
November 17, 2010 at 2:13 PM
Fabulous use of hear-say and astrology in this write with nice rhyming, Tahera
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Oh, boy, a failure right up to execution day. well, I sure hope this was not based on your reality! Tahera, all this time I believed you to be female. I know this is a stupid question, but are you male or female?I guess it depends on whether this is just a made up poem or not! For me , a minx is for a girl. But then I got confused when you said you asked a girl to marry you. WEll, this is an interesting poem and I much enjoyed the read. Luv, Andrea
Gelb Avatar
November 17, 2010 at 4:37 AM
Thank You for the comment. Nice poem.
Onclaud Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 11:33 PM
your delightful word images woo me, tahera... a sunting piece for braveheart women! thank you for the inspiration and your last note on thread! warmest, nette
M V Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 9:39 PM
It is beautifully rhyming.I enjoyed your thoughts on failure
A   Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 9:05 PM
oi, I was born on the 7th & all of a sudden I feel like a minx, but the mother part was sad. I lost my mother when I was born, ((my adopted parents never told me the truth)) I found her later in life~ only 2 lose her again, 2 the reason I lost her in the first place, (a no good life) well i guess i feel as if my 7 years of bad luck will never end. How many mirror's did i break? I will never know. The wedding day is funny! well sorry if not intended to be funny. I live in my execution STILL,.pd
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