My World of Love

The first phase is excitement

the next phase is judgement

3rd includes the attachment with commitment

and final phase comes as settlement.


a phase certainly missed out

thats why true love doesnt sprout

its just love and i also wanna know whats it all about.


its u in me ,

hiding tears growing like tree,

but tears r the actual love fee.


the excitement i feel thinking

a smile crosses me while blinking

your face can make me die peacefully while sinking.


i can sit 1000 hours in a mob yet alone,

i can stand and pass by any danger zone

the only purpose now left for my phone

is to hear your voice either as alarm ,message or ringtone.


my world of love consist of only you,

i know many surprises for us are still due,

1st your smile,then your touch & your shyness is in que.


my days become nights and nights becomes days,

every sec away from you is like diff stays,

searching ur smile in different sun rays,

coz i know true love one days definitely pays.


in short you are my world so nice

in every thought of mine you add spice,

so please never tear apart my thoughts

and my commitment that's my only advice,

coz your presence ,when i am alone,is my only working device.


So i never wanna come out of it,

and i know our worlds are attached with a slit,

which has at least now has least chances to split.


But even if u will go out of my life,

i will live happy and will not strife,

don't shock,its you who trained me to drive,

and its your thoughts and memories which inside me, always keeps you alive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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