My World

A galaxy lives within me through sky’s marquee my heart beholds one earth’s design— as moon, lake twine in peace, I shine from heaven's mold. Desiderata Contest--nette onclaud Franco Gonza 7 Dec 2014

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2014 9:07:00 PM

FRANCO, CONGRATULATIONS on your "DESIDERATA," winning poem... always ~LINDA~

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/16/2014 8:06:00 AM

This is so very beautiful Franco. Congratulations on your amazing winning poem.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/16/2014 5:05:00 AM

you truly inspired and interpreted the theme with grace, franco..a pleasure to have you in my contest with my big congrats!

John Lawless

Date: 12/14/2014 5:15:00 PM

This poem is like a painting you have to slow down to make sure you didn't miss anything. Well done Franco.

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/14/2014 2:34:00 PM

Oh my......I think this one is my favorite! Lovely poem, and congratulations on your win!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2014 10:44:00 AM

this is simply wonderful. BIG congrats for your well deserved win.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2014 9:29:00 AM

beautifully written many congrats:-) hugs Jan x

Donna Jones

Date: 12/14/2014 7:16:00 AM

Enjoyed this magnificent poem Franco...congratulations

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/14/2014 4:18:00 AM

Nicely crafted piece on peace, congratulations on the win, Franco

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/14/2014 2:07:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Franco!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/14/2014 12:47:00 AM

Congrats on the win Franco...huggs