My World

My world is a jigsaw puzzle with many pieces
My world can be harsh and cruel on occasion
My world can bring you to your knees praying
My world can be unfair and overwhelming
My world is full of love and misery
My world is full of unjust treatment and racism
My world can be unforgiving and precious
My world isn't just for me, but you as well
Our world is a big jig saw puzzle waiting to be completed
Laying piece by piece in place until their is unity. This is what our world should be!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Cooper Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 12:10 PM
such a great pen you weld
Deane Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 9:24 AM
Our emotions are sometimes the stepping stones to honest writing...luv Shannon
Onclaud Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 12:19 PM
i like the examination of feelings expressed in this piece, cory... so heartwarming.. winning wishes if for a contest..:) huggs, nette
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