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My Words I'D Love To Release

I have no idle time to spare to just sit, rest and stare Leisure, a word I literally define into my world I can trace no sign a body in motion.. a brain absorbed beauty blurred.. life confined The Muse of poetry, the soul is the abode do I need my ink to upload? ***** My words I’d love to release restore between the ribs peace. ***** A past lingering sweet incense feeding the inner self with sense As for now, prevailing is the scent of evil human nature slipping into upheaval Souls roaming.. dry are their wells unspirited shapes.. empty shells There is fire that burns not kindles the voice of heart fades and dwindles. ***** My words I’d love to release restore between the ribs peace. ***** Hiding within words magic strain bonding with stories penned out of pain I learnt to understand and withstand a living human not in human hand I was once made quite aware of one answer to Humanity welfare Put aside your words and thoughts restore your nature.. untie your knots Nature immunes your body and spirit bliss and peace, a reward on your merit. ***** My words I’d love to release restore between the ribs peace.

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/22/2020 10:51:00 PM

that's the word of heart///

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/29/2020 2:30:00 AM

Glad my humble words have reached your poetic soul, Mahtab.. so pleased by your graceful visit.. thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/18/2020 9:02:00 PM

"I have no idle time to spare to just sit, rest and stare- a body in motion, a brain absorbed" I understand completely my dear sweet friend. Words are like moments waiting to be captured. It seems you have. Oh my !! You have created a Masterpiece. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. You have a wonderful heart and it shines through your poetry. :) Hugs, Brandy

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/19/2020 9:16:00 AM

Sweet Brandy, how I relish in such beautiful and kind words! The magic of your unique presence and the warmth of a rewarding feedback! A blessing to be surrounded by beautiful souls who inspire Love and generosity! Thank you so much dear sweet friend for pouring glee into my heart.. Blessings to you. Love and hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/8/2020 11:48:00 AM

Your poetic Nature, my wonderful dear friend, could never be subdued come what may, you will leave behind in a hundred years from now, a legacy which your family will be immensely proud of. I am proud to be your friend dearest Besma - I so enjoyed the repetition of your two lines between each stanza - what a joy you are and how blessed we are to be graced with your presence. Hugs, love and blessings, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/18/2020 1:07:00 AM

The honour and great pleasure are mine dear soul sister Jenny! Your genuine and generous words do have a tremendous impact on my very soul! So beautiful and uplifting are your impressions on my humble soul and poetry.. you are a beauty in your amazing humility! Blessed I am to walk the path of a rewarding friendship and inspiring poetry, sweet friend! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Maria Williams

Date: 11/7/2020 3:07:00 AM

You are Poetry in Motion my dearest Besma . Your thoughts flow and ink can hardly keep up. Beautiful poetry as always my dearest Besma . Your refraining lines say it all, your words long to be released, so, never stop writing my friend Always a fave .....Maria Hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/18/2020 1:02:00 AM

And you are the epitome of beauty and inspiration, dearest Maria! So touched by your great words of praise and appreciation! I'm so grateful to you for such a sincere support and encouragement! You have always been a shining and enlightening soul on my path.. thank you so much! Deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/6/2020 7:01:00 PM

You’re releasing greatness from within to share and inspire us. Beautifully done!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/18/2020 12:51:00 AM

So much delighted to read your kind and rewarding response to my humble poetry, dear Akkina! Thank you so much! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/6/2020 12:51:00 PM

From within we hold a treasure trove of ideas and thoughts just waiting to surface and they do, then we transfer them to screen or paper, for the world to enjoy. Well written Besma. I hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/18/2020 12:49:00 AM

I'm always obliged to you for your continuous support and wonderful feedback on my humble words.. thank you so much, Tom for such a remarkable generosity, humility and your warm wishes.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Jcb Brul

Date: 11/5/2020 12:52:00 AM

You have brilliantly released very evocative and contemplative words that touch lives, dear Besma. We have that special place in our inner self where our treasured thoughts dwell. Very inspiring write!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/6/2020 6:13:00 AM

I am so delighted my inner thoughts and feels touched your beautiful soul and poetic heart, dear JCB! Always a great pleasure to see you on my page.. thank you so much for your great compliment! My warmest wishes.. Regards and blessings.

Silent One

Date: 11/4/2020 8:30:00 AM

Such a lovely poem with a great refrain, keep releasing those words my friend..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/6/2020 6:09:00 AM

I'm so happy you liked and enjoyed my humble poetry, Silent One.. Such a great pleasure to read your uplifting and generous words! Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/4/2020 5:31:00 AM

Effective use of trochee, each line anticipates...nice work, Besma!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/6/2020 6:06:00 AM

My honour and pleasure, James.. so much appreciated your visit and wonderful response to my humble work! Thank you so much.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/4/2020 4:37:00 AM

Much latent energy is inspiring your thoughts to create--quite a contemplative write, Besma! Your world of poetry shines in this poem.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/6/2020 6:04:00 AM

And your wonderful and uplifting words shine on page and bring a lot of beauty and happiness, dear Vijay.. thank you so much for the great feedbacks, support and appreciation of my humble work.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/3/2020 11:09:00 PM

So long as you don't get a writer's block, with time to spare poetry is the best way to pass the time. Deep ideas, Besma. Wonderful to read you these days. Blessings ~~

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/6/2020 6:01:00 AM

The pen is getting tougher and tougher on its ink.. and always aspiring the Muse of poetry would sow a most genuine and beautiful of seeds.. Thank you so much, Victor, for your continuous support.. for being here to appreciate my humble poetry, elevate and elate my soul. My deepest regards and blessings.