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My wishes; my wishes! Oh, what are my wishes? So many to wish on a star! Love and peace on this earth. That no children would starve. Most obvious these choices are. But let me be greedy and tell what I’d wish for if wishes were granted to me. I’d wish for a new car - a beauty and sporty. A sweet ride like Lamborghini. I’ll now make this simple. Why wish for each item when money can get me most stuff? I'd wish that no matter the things that I wanted, my cash would be always enough! So that is my big wish. I guess you might say be blessed with Bill Gates type of wealth. But for now in my life I have only one wish - completely regaining good health! Jan. 16, 2020 for the What are Your Wishes Poetry contest of Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 1/24/2020 8:42:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! It's my prayer that the Lord will grant your wish. God bless you.
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Date: 1/24/2020 12:19:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win. Your wishes are so relevant and true in the present-day world.
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Date: 1/24/2020 12:02:00 AM
A Lamborghini, money and health is not too much to ask, Andrea. Very best wishes. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/23/2020 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations and Kudos on your win. This poem has such honesty.
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Date: 1/23/2020 5:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea! Love your honesty and great rhythm, and how you end with the simple but very profound wish of good health ~ John
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Date: 1/23/2020 1:52:00 PM
Andrea congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 1/17/2020 10:07:00 PM
Yeppers nothing beats good health... Nice write as always
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Date: 1/17/2020 6:02:00 PM
Hello Andrea … great verse to read and your final line puts everything into perspective - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 1/17/2020 4:48:00 PM
Well crafted and accomplished! Just remember American doctors are "For Profit" NOT for cures! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/17/2020 8:24:00 AM
Both good health and money go a long way to make a satisfying life, Andrea. Of course, love & peace are a necessity. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/17/2020 8:18:00 AM
Without our health nothing else matters. Excellent wish and poem. Hugs
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Date: 1/17/2020 7:40:00 AM
Health is the most important to wish for, Nicely expressed Andrea..
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Date: 1/17/2020 7:24:00 AM
May your wishes come true--especially regaining good health. All the best, Andrea.
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Date: 1/17/2020 4:53:00 AM
Health is the greatest thing in the world, Andrea. I did not appreciate that until I started to lose mine. It's amazing how much it means now. Thank you for writing this one!
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Date: 1/17/2020 2:33:00 AM
My hubbies cancer has taught us if you have your health you are the wealthiest person in the world. I know how much you are doing to bring your body back to being healthy keep on fighting the after affects of the old medication Andrea!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2020 7:26:00 PM
Hope your final wish comes true Andrea , as that saying goes, your wealth is your health. Good luck. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/16/2020 9:11:00 PM
yeah, my doctor messed me up good, Tom. I am on a journey to find a solution

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