My Wish List

At night, this is when I start dreaming,
dreaming of things hardly likely to exist.
I think of a world different from ours,
I'll give my dream world breath-taking powers:
All people will live a life of ease,
we won't know the meaning of the word disease,
there will be no darkness in people's minds
and bad thoughts will be left behind;
Can't help longing for unceasing youth,
cause I'm afraid of the death-this is the truth;
If no one of us ever gets old
we'll never lose the ones we love
and we'll always have their hands to hold.
I wonder if my fantasy can become real,
only then my heart will heal-
heal from the fear of this imperfect life.
Maybe if I pray harder for my wish
God will do everything right.
Until then I'll keep  dreaming every night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/19/2016 8:29:00 AM
Your wish list is what many dream of, flowed seamlessly. I found it to be quite uplifting. Congratulations!
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 7/19/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you very much, love :)
Date: 7/17/2016 5:40:00 PM
Victoria, congratulations on your wonderful dreamin'' win. LUV **SKAT**
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 7/18/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thank you, I'm so happy! :)
Date: 3/26/2016 10:31:00 AM
Victoria, you have an honest way of writing. You held your heart right... Linda
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Date: 10/31/2014 11:30:00 AM
Dreaming is always nice, and it is what keep us alive. And yes, God, I believe listens to ours prayers. very nice poem Victoria! Happy Halloween and wish you the best! ;) xxxx D.
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 11/1/2014 3:37:00 AM
Hey, thank you so much. I'm new here and exited. I'll check your writings as well, xxx
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