My Wish Is You

sometimes when i'm all alone
nobody with me everybody gone
i think of how it's nice to be home
surrounded by all of my belongings
my bed , my phone
but when the phone does'nt ring
i feel so all alone
when i know that no one is comming
and yet i hate to be alone
i wish that there was somebody there
someone who loved me someone who cared
i wish that they'd write poetry and letters
so that without a doubt 
i'd know my feelings were shared
and that would be my wish come true
and my second wish is that it were you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Babcock Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 10:35 AM
No matter what, we all need time alone but mostly we need people around us to make us feel wanted and loved. Enjoyed your write. God Bless Phyl
Bien Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 1:57 PM
Love this! Sometimes it is nice to be alone, sometimes it is not. When you are with the right person...it is not! JB
Nutter Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 3:06 AM
Nice piece, talented write but this one lacks originality, just another poem about searching for love.
Mehta Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 7:36 AM
Lovely thoughts of passionate feelings, The Situation
Loving Iii Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 2:48 AM
could'nt have said it better myself. John H Loving III
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