My Wish Is You

sometimes when i'm all alone
nobody with me everybody gone
i think of how it's nice to be home
surrounded by all of my belongings
my bed , my phone
but when the phone does'nt ring
i feel so all alone
when i know that no one is comming
and yet i hate to be alone
i wish that there was somebody there
someone who loved me someone who cared
i wish that they'd write poetry and letters
so that without a doubt 
i'd know my feelings were shared
and that would be my wish come true
and my second wish is that it were you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/7/2011 10:35:00 AM
No matter what, we all need time alone but mostly we need people around us to make us feel wanted and loved. Enjoyed your write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/2/2011 1:57:00 PM
Love this! Sometimes it is nice to be alone, sometimes it is not. When you are with the right person...it is not! JB
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Date: 2/28/2011 3:06:00 AM
Nice piece, talented write but this one lacks originality, just another poem about searching for love.
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:36:00 AM
Lovely thoughts of passionate feelings, The Situation
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Date: 2/27/2011 2:48:00 AM
could'nt have said it better myself. John H Loving III
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