Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

My Wish

by Michael J Falotico

                                          It took years to get my wish..
                                   To cross paths of fire to find some bliss..
                                  And now I just breathe to taste your kiss..

                                To wake in the night and see you by my side..
                            Just to know when the sun rises our hearts still ride..
                             Where I can say what"s on my mind and never hide..

                               Steps we both took put us in each others place..
                           Just when we thought time has passed with no trace..
                                Our eyes met and the stars shined with grace..

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Cory Long August 24, 2011 at 5:53 PM this is a beautiful write with so much passion and emotion.. glad you found love.. love cory

Wilma Neels August 21, 2011 at 1:09 PM Quixotic write Michael, enjoyed this gem tonight.. Hope you share this beauty with Rosanna, enjoy what is left of your weekend.. Cape Town is chilly today lol ;) love WNN

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 21, 2011 at 11:39 AM that is exactly how it happens Michael.. that special feeling and knowing it is LUV ..the grandest emotion shared between two human beings.. even more than passion.. luv is pure and perfection.. wonderful words express your deep luv ... your J.G. in LUV mode always and forever ... across the precipice.. GW...

James Peranteau August 20, 2011 at 8:18 PM How romantic dear poet ! Wonderful feeling shared for the longing ! *smiles*....mine self ! Have a blessed night my friend ! Much love, james

Dinda Minardi August 20, 2011 at 5:04 PM I love the rhyme, Michael. You chosed a right words for beautifully written poetry. You poems make me breathe love. thank you. Your admirer, Dinda.

Jl Sadberry August 20, 2011 at 3:29 PM Smile, *^_^* “Wonderful Rhyme of Loves Blessings My Dear Precious & Gifted Friend! = Tis Why One Should Never Give-Up On Hopes Nor Love For, Its Treasures Have Always Been, Waiting Just for Us!” === My Love Unto You & Yours, Jasper *

Sara Kendrick August 20, 2011 at 3:22 PM Soooo romantic..Enjoyed..Sara