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My Wish

When I look at the sky at night
I see the stars with their twinkling light.
I wish I could speak to them.
I wish I could know how they reached that height.
I want to be successful in life.
I want to be in everyone's sight.
I love the present as it is now.
I love the future to be bright.
I become dreamy when I look at you.
(Oh, stars)I become hopeful when I see your light.
I wish to be a star in the life.
I wish to be a star with never ending light.

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Beata Agustin March 12, 2024 at 2:57 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Pintu Chandra Deb May 31, 2017 at 2:16 PM Wish you a good life!

Poet Destroyer A February 7, 2016 at 1:22 AM SUDIPTA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A November 11, 2015 at 10:53 PM Sudipta, ENJOYED.. Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"

Dr.Ram Mehta July 6, 2011 at 2:42 PM beautiful and lovely imagery you have created with nice expressions, Sudipta

Ralph Taylor July 6, 2011 at 2:21 PM Welcome to PS, Sudipta. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown July 6, 2011 at 11:53 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sudipta. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown July 6, 2011 at 11:46 AM Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it Sudipta. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 6, 2011 at 11:32 AM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site and it s many features as others enjoy creative words with luv.. excellent luv..