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My Winter

My winter's begun No more laughing No more fun Lifelong friends Have slipped away Facing bitter ends Snow on roof As fire fades Vitals now aloof When winter ends Will I be Well, that depends

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/22/2018 8:40:00 AM

Winter can bring such a chill - literally as well as figuratively and you have nailed it with this philosophical piece! BRAVO! Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/9/2017 4:09:00 PM

Jerry, It sounds like you have a touch of SAD that comes in winter blues. I too have lost so many friends which makes one really face one's mortality. Penned poignantly with your brilliant hand! Happy Holidays! ; )

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/10/2017 6:54:00 AM

You are too kind Connie, Thank you

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/1/2017 2:00:00 PM

Oh, harsh as winter can be! Cutting pen.

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/10/2017 6:56:00 AM

Thanks Maureen, I need to stop by your page more often, your work is always top shelf